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Woven Worlds Alice Would Be Proud

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Alice's Adventures in Wonderland is a story about personal evolution, growth, and learning. Alice's journey teaches us to find beauty in our own lives, be flexible, have faith in ourselves, embrace the unexpected, and never give up on our dreams. The story also represents the child's struggle to survive in the confusing world of adults, and teaches us to overcome the open-mindedness that is characteristic for children

She finds the pink planet, musing Alice Liddell's Imagination is the only weapon in war with reality. Sky's canvas, brushed cotton candy clouds where marshmallow mountains peak and the seventh sun rides low 'til the man in the moon awakens. White light and red filters a pink-tint, nebulous fringed rose gold. Pearlescent beams lap at her legs, silhouettes blossom as silky waves of jasmine kiss, spiral, and envelop her open-mindness to embrace the unexpected Alice would be proud realization pink planet a bountiful life journey

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Suzette Richards

Date: 4/6/2024 10:05:00 AM

Awards at the end of an imaginary rainbow of colours. Who said poetry has to be ta-dum, ta-dum .. Give me a vivid imagination anyday and "embrace the unexpected". Have a nice weekend, Anaya :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/6/2024 10:24:00 AM

Oh Suzette, I will work on my ta-dums haha! Love the comment. You too, have a great weekend! 'D

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/23/2024 4:53:00 AM

Wow. This has to be a winner. The glowing diction in your prose is gorgeous, and just exudes images that delight one's imagination. Your Tanka is word perfect and accompanies the prose as a well matched partner. This is really wonderful Anaya. OK so I sound gushy, but this is honest praise. I really love it.

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/23/2024 11:38:00 AM

Aha, really, too bad it's not in the contest. :D Mushroom world is my preference! I got carried away with the Tanka/Prose! Thank you, dear, I like mushy gushy!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/21/2024 2:30:00 PM

Well, this Alice is proud of you for writing this delightful and fanciful tanka prose. Your imagery is a match for Skie. ;)

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/21/2024 3:19:00 PM

Linda Alice Fowler, what a pleasure, stranger. I like the tanka prose, it took me a few tries and am happy with mine, I know you wrote one as well, GL. My entry is a Mushroom World, LOl.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2024 9:54:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative "Alice" write/great fun picture. Life is a long journey never knowing where one will go. Have a wonderful day..................

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/17/2024 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, Paula! If we are lucky enough to enjoy by embracing it!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 7:40:00 AM

Here the imagery and the unique presentation of alliteration of visualisation is excellent from all prospects

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/17/2024 10:07:00 AM

Hi Silpika thank you for your review!

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/17/2024 2:07:00 AM

I love the alliteration in this poem "canvas candy clouds, where marshmallow mountains peak". Quite imaginative and visual. Its amazing how a literally work written a century ago can still impact us today. Enjoyed

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/17/2024 10:06:00 AM

It's fun letting go and embracing the imagination, Marugu, although structured with limited words. Thank you for your visit & glad you enjoyed! xo

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/16/2024 10:50:00 AM

Open mindedness, is indeed the key to a full and well rounded existence Anaya, embrace the unexpected and call it as it is, no matter how many fairytales or elephants they try put in our way, creative work, and a great one for contest, best of luck, cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2024 10:55:00 AM

Aw, thanks David, but the real contest entry is the one before this..."Woven Worlds" My Mushroom planet!!! LOL. Hope you can make shroom for it! haha

Silent One

Date: 3/16/2024 7:10:00 AM

Very imaginative Anaya.. Your poem concludes with a sense of gratitude and wonder, as the protagonist embraces the bountiful life journey that her open-mindedness has led her on. Overall, this poem celebrates the power of imagination to transcend reality and lead us to unexpected and wondrous places, reminding us to embrace the unknown with open arms and a curious spirit.

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2024 8:17:00 AM

SO, I did one for the contest Woven Worlds Tanka/Prose, felt l would keep the imagination flowing, and voila! Thank you for your visit.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/16/2024 1:07:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning, the creative use of imagery and depth of this poem truly is impeccable. So many lines stood out for me but i mostly loved “ A seventh sun is low on the horizon 'til the man on the moon awakens White light mixes with red light, filtering through the atmosphere“ how dreamy and imaginative is that and your use of colors and flowers really enhances the beauty of what you’ve conveyed here. I love silky waves of jasmine and pink tinted sky and rose gold as well as marshmallow mountains. So beautiful! And artistic. Pleasure reading this. A fave for me

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2024 8:21:00 AM

The sky and graphics are from Pinecrest, I tweaked the girl in Alice dress up, it is a beautiful sky. There is a whole science on how the sky turns pink! I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you for the fave, Empress! The real Woven Worlds is for the contest..mushroomlandia & pixies. lol ;D