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I'm wounded to my core, bereft and filled with grief. My mother has died and my pain's beyond belief. The sun no longer shines as storm clouds clot the skies. And a river of tears flows from my crying eyes. I want to be angry, though there's no one to blame. And yet, Mom has passed on, and life won't be the same. A beautiful woman; I won't forget her face. For in my heart of hearts, she holds an honored place. I feel an emptiness; part of me is missing. And it's easy to cry, merely reminiscing. (Quatrain) 9/22/2017

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Appropriate title and lovely tribute, Emile. A very emotive and touching write.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2017 1:31:00 PM
The memory of your mother will never fade, Emile. I feel the same way about both parents. A compassionate tribute to love.
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Lin, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/23/2017 12:36:00 AM
Oh Emile, I feel your pain as I remember when my mama died so well. But, they'll always live in the beautiful spirit world now where you will see her again. Wonderful poem which depicts those feelings of grief perfectly.
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Date: 9/23/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Carole, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2017 8:40:00 PM
A heartbreaking pen dear poet, your pen weeps. Tendresse
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Date: 9/23/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2017 3:50:00 PM
So sad and very well expressed in this nice poem Emile !
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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