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Would You Chanso -Edited

Would you bring for me a rose bouquet? Were I your love, that would be so sweet. Surely it would brighten up my day. And might you bring chocolates for me? So sweet that would be. Am I your love - the only one that you want to see? And for me, a small bird would you bring? Your love would feel like a melody each time I heard the pretty bird sing. Poetry from you I’d love to hear. A melody with it too – so nice! How I’d love to hear you sing it, Dear. If none of these you’d bring, I’d not care. So nice it is just to see your face. How I would love just to have you there. . . your face when I wakened and at night your arms around me holding me tight.

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Date: 7/15/2023 10:30:00 AM
Sweet romantic write Andrea. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 7/11/2023 6:34:00 PM
A sweet chanso, Andrea! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2023 5:08:00 PM
such loving words, hope he will do, perhaps for mother's day ??? would be nice ??? thanks fo the beautiful and romantic poem thanks
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Date: 5/12/2023 1:02:00 AM
Superb and romantic. You inserted all the lovely ingredients of poetry. Hugs.
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:54:00 PM
Fantastic job! Nice rhyme and rhythm there. Also low key this is kind of a rap. Please note I said "LOW KEY".
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/12/2023 8:49:00 AM
i could be a romantic rapper, haha
Date: 5/11/2023 8:27:00 AM
All you need is someone in your life, someone to wake up with. I think you're on a winner.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/11/2023 12:46:00 PM
i have that, Paul. But romance would be nice. haha
Date: 5/11/2023 7:08:00 AM
Nice write, Andrea. Sometimes all we need is a little hug:) Happy Mother's Day young lady!
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Date: 5/11/2023 4:36:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. I love this. The entry is so poetic and has all elements attached. Truly. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful morning. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful. I just love this. Wishing you a win. God bless you sweet friend, Love, Gina
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