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" IN MEMORY OF THE DEAD OF WW ONE " MY PHOTO, ©

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They met on the battlefield of duty Young men all were, full of dreams for the future The spring of their lives had just begun But All answered the call and came at once to fight for: Their country Their families Their beliefs Their faith Their honor And they did fight to the very end with hate for the enemy in their hearts Till their bodies were laid on the ground- dead! Then, As their souls were leaving the prison of their inanimate bodies, Liberated thus from: Misguidance Ignorance Planted hate and Injustice Looked at each other anew and to their amazement realized That nothing from what divided them till then anymore existed: No country No family No creed No status and No race For The same all were- Pure light, having heaven as their home And only love in their consciousness they felt, Love that all of them united into One So As their souls filled with the divine knowledge of the Oneness Jubilant soared to heaven, where God, the father of them all- With opened arms to receive them awaited! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 November 2018 * The leaders of the world met the other day in Paris to pay tribute to all those who fell in the line of duty during the first WW. This little poem is my tribute to all those who gave their life for us to live in peace today. Let us pray that no war will disturb humanity in the future because we, in reality are brothers and sisters!

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Date: 11/13/2018 12:17:00 PM
- Even though "The spring of their lives had just begun" they sacrificed themselves ... their family and their own life - Many heroes of that time who gave their lives for us to live in peace - Let's pray that there will never be a new world war ... it would be a completely different war ... no one would survive, my friend ... - Let's fight for peace and love - Many thanks for the lovely tribute, they really deserve it ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting in such a noble way, fitting to those, for freedom fallen men, dearest, Anne-Lise! God bless you! Hugsxxx
Date: 11/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Oh, Demetrios, that is so, so touching. Hopeful for those who fought as well as us, too, who fight different kinds of fights.
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:51:00 AM
Each day is a fight or a war to survive but we have more chances of survival than those at a real war on the battlefield! Thank you my friend, Sunlite!
Date: 11/13/2018 10:17:00 AM
If it is one thing i've learnt here on soup, Demetrios, it is, nobody wants war,,yet history tells us, there is always someone out there, gunning for it....I love your poem, you are so right, i just wish us poets, could be the majority and not the minority., on this wonderful planet.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2018 11:54:00 AM
My friend, harry , the vast majority of my 2143 poems are dealing with God, peace and love! Many times I have asked what you ask now: Us the poets to become a force of peace and love! Thank you very much my friend!
Date: 11/13/2018 8:06:00 AM
Your poem is memorial to those who served..hope they listen to your advice..we are all indeed brothers and sisters..well expressed my friend.
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:57:00 AM
Unfortunately people realize our brotherhood after the war is fought! I am certain the souls realize it as soon as they are liberated from the prison of the body! The good news is my friend, Vijay that for the first time in the European history we did not have war in 73 years! AMAZING! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 11/13/2018 3:26:00 AM
Beautiful tribute Demetrios, it was supposed to be the war to end all wars. Sadly mankind is slow to learn from his mistakes . Tom.
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Date: 11/13/2018 5:34:00 AM
Thank you dear, Tom for your lovely visit and comment! True they thought it was the war that would end all wars. How wrong they were! Hope it will not happen again but...I do not hold my breath , unfortunately...!

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