Words with Soul

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My poems are words with soul - Silent One.

 As a monotone morning sketches 
charcoal trees under 
smoke filled foggy skies,
rain casually falls,
sliding down slate roofs,
causing havoc for traffic
on bustling roads.
Red lights seem to shimmer,
shining through shades of grey,
as the sound of raindrops drip
against my BMW's black bonnet,
my mind drifts nonchalantly,
 discarding beeping horns and FM beats.

I ponder
is it an act or is it an art
this thing they label as life,
living with a formula formed and forged
from a mix of experiences and emotions.

I begin to question myself.
(why do we do that?)

I seem to have adopted a sense of vulnerability,
fusing feelings of fragility, 
since my hair infused into silver (yes I chose silver over grey) - 
something my father warned against.
But I'm not as tough as him,
although he wasn't half the man I am...

Yet what I have seen and heard,
has ultimately made me who I am today
and in all the suffering I have 
always searched for the light -
Rumi was right.

Maybe I'm too open minded,
too fair in this field of selfish spirits.
Maybe I'm not loyal enough to my beliefs,
which contradict my moral compass
and philosophical projections,
but I've never claimed to be saint.

My soul is telling me to shut up..

I've always wondered if I'll ever be understood..
At least I understand me - but is that any consolation?

It's not as simple as wisdom accumulating.
Sensitivity of a smile can never be underestimated.
You have to peer beyond the verbal,
non verbal - comprehend the action.
Sometimes I feel unloved,
many times invisible,
yet I seem to come alive in loneliness.

Would I be a plaintiff or defendant
in a court of your judgment?
I will always represent myself.
Words with speech have never been true confessions,
as my thoughts are too deep,
sometimes too unreliable,
that's why I never pen them down -
it scares my soul (who tells me again to shut up).

I wonder if I make sense. Soul calls it nonsense.

Green flashing circle says I can go.
An abrupt end to contemplation.
Sadly grey tones and 
tints of tiredness remain.

Simple Musing
8 December 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/11/2023 6:03:00 PM
I bow to you much respect of this yet another masterpiece. I bet even your walk is poetic.
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Date: 12/8/2023 5:13:00 PM
Lots of deep musings... you seem very philosophical. Ah, Rumi... I only know bits of him, but I like what he says. "Why" is a question for every single answer is something I am getting, lol...which leads me to more questions. Sigh. Beautiful words....
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:32:00 PM
Continued ... Thank you for opening your heart, mind and soul through this masterpiece of prose, Silent One. I should probably use soup mail; this is too long for these limitations. Every word resonates with me completely. Let your soul speak, my friend. It's beautiful. Your friend, Bill
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:27:00 PM
I am in the presence of peace of mind and heart and soul, at this moment. You have led me here with your deep dive into the essence of knowing. No explanation is ever enough for the conscious mind, the Truth, the completeness, the wholeness is here and beyond my physical body. A second read, while listening to "Tears of Silence", held me in the state on mind (or out of mind) that is so soothing. I want to stay here, in the peace and Love. Thank you for this FAV, and this experience. Bill
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:41:00 PM
I haven't dropped in for over a year but I wanted to tell you how much I liked this poem. Smooth and deep. Just what I have come to expect from you. Keep them coming.
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Date: 12/8/2023 1:19:00 PM
Such a poignant, eloquent, and perceptive piece, dear Silent One! Always allow your soul to express openly, my friend...your marvelous poetry will never go unnoticed due to your open-mindedness and impartiality. You possess a linguistic ability that is conjointly supple and substantial.
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Date: 12/8/2023 12:07:00 PM
Deep and introspective, SO. I hear the potent voice of your reflective write.
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Date: 12/8/2023 9:38:00 AM
Your words are with soul, and that is why you touch so many souls with them. I really felt the depth of this poem, and it made me a bit sad: such raw sincere feelings flowing with such flawless alliterations. Iv never tried writing prose, and im not sure if i can really but you do it so well. Every form every theme every subject; where do i even start with what i love the most here! I must say i love “ Sometimes I feel unloved, many times invisible,yet I seem to come alive in loneliness.” Love-
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Date: 12/8/2023 9:40:00 AM
That! It made me go awwn and feel so much. And the ending is brilliant: i bet your simple musings too are just beyond impeccable. Leaves me in awe just mesmerized by your poetic skills and ability to let your thoughts spill in sheer brilliance. Pleasure reading this. Another fave for me
Date: 12/8/2023 9:34:00 AM
- Always let your soul speak freely, my friend ...open minded and fair...you never become invisible with your wonderful poetry :) - hugs
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Date: 12/8/2023 11:34:00 AM
Thank you my friend, just using different styles of writing.. this one was just written off the pen..
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