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Words on the page A face and a hand in a grand illustration, still in the corner I hide Formed of this feel and its lengthened frustration, longing to come but inside Thoughts that I bear, like a weight ever growing, changing my whole point of view Staring the crowd it is who I am knowing, given the old and the new Reaching a bit, to evade their detection, what would the words seem to say Scared and amiss and in fear of rejection, cast but the hours away A shrug of my shoulders, the look on my face, all as an act and a dream For I have fallen this road to retrace, words on the page they do scream Take what you want, it won’t wait any longer, nothing to lose but regret Tell her your feelings and watch it grow stronger, jump in, get both your feet wet Still I stand firm with my legs feigning motion fearful of answers to find Happiness laughs like a fool hearted notion wishing to only rewind When you appear and my pulse reacts pounding courage I force to my veins Reading a poem of love so resounding checking my voice as it strains Seeing you smile in the grandest expression taking my trembling hand Sighing my words are your deepest obsession gladly you do understand Now as we dip in the future’s endeavors, drenched in the moments apart For in this fountain we’re swimming together, writing of love from the heart Well, I did it again. I wrote this for a contest and THEN read the rules…duh. It’s too long but...I wrote it so here it is

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Date: 5/4/2017 8:56:00 AM
It might be too long for the contest...but not too long for me to read and enjoy every heartbeat you put in these words-Sigh. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/4/2017 9:00:00 AM
Then it was worth writing all of those stanzas if it brought a sigh from you my sweet friend. Your kindness is always an overflowing fountain of happiness for me. Thank you so very much Charmaine.
Date: 5/4/2017 5:28:00 AM
Exuse me Mr. Chris. Have a seat please. Forget the contest. This entry far exceeds a contest. I won't take this entry apart by stanza or line or word. It stands as a whole and as one. My goodness Chris this is beautiful in every way and so has the emotive factor present. One word that comes to mind is exquisite and solid. Ok so I have two (lol) Yes, you did it again thank goodness for us readers and friends. Duh.... and Duh again... Have a wonderful morning.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/4/2017 8:35:00 AM
My friend, your kindness forever outshines any sun that might greet my day. Thank you for this wonderful comment on my poem. I am so happy you liked this one. Yep, it far exceeded the contest line maximum. I need to learn to read the rules but then again, I don't ask for directions either. :)
Date: 5/3/2017 2:07:00 PM
You are just someone who loves sooooooo much, that it's not fitting any contest. It's THEM, not YOU ;).... so romantic, and loving. sigh.. too bad I'm a guy.
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Darren White
Date: 5/4/2017 2:51:00 AM
Just send in twice, first half, and then second half, I won't mind doing that for you ;) LOL
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Chris Green
Date: 5/3/2017 5:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren. It's not their fault, they came up with the rules for the contest, I just didn't read them completely. It was a maximum of 20 lines. I think this one is just a few more than that. :)
Date: 5/3/2017 1:09:00 PM
Excellent Chris. It should be in the contest somehow :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/3/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, maybe someday some one will hold a contest for long winded rhyming love poems. :) I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 5/3/2017 11:48:00 AM
Oh no, Chris! Too long my foot! It's perfect! Lovely bro! Change the rules I say, break that code! Poetry must be allowed to flow freely. Limiting lines is so absurd indeed!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/3/2017 12:38:00 PM
I know, I'm with you but I didn't make the rules. :) Thank so much my friend.

Book: Shattered Sighs