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Words left Unsaid

Words left unsaid as teardrops fell The price of love, their hearts would tell And so they parted, love took flight And left their hearts to lonely nights Each unable to break loves spell Distant sound of the old church bell Rang through seasons they knew so well Winter to spring, summer shone bright Words left unsaid Each had a broken heart to sell As fire within they tried to quell Memories fade in Luna's light Stars wished upon twinkle in sight Love's distant star, flickers farewell Words left unsaid -- 9/22/17 Contest Name: Form U- U pick 'em Sponsor; Broken Wings

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Date: 10/22/2017 10:39:00 AM
Yes loves hurt when it fades. I feel your pain. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
ahh yes loves broken hearts. a write so well written from your heart!
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Date: 10/21/2017 8:05:00 PM
This is very nice :) like some I've wrotten .
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:45:00 PM
Great to see this with a win. Congrats, Joseph.
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:34:00 PM
Sad but beautiful, Joseph. This is one form which I must have a go at; having read yours I am now tempted to. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Paul..I hope you give it a try..I know you will write it well
Date: 9/23/2017 12:04:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 9/23/2017 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph! :)
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 9/23/2017 9:19:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely Rondeau, I really liked the form and must try it, well done!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for my placement BW..hugs
Date: 9/22/2017 6:02:00 PM
Joseph, you did Rondeau great justice with this poem. I love the form you chose AND your take on "words left unsaid"
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...hugs
Date: 9/22/2017 5:05:00 PM
Beautifully written Rondeau, Joseph. Extremely hard form to write ... your talented pen painted a masterpiece. Great title too! An instant classic. Worthy of POTW. Gold standard poetry. Love and joy always.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 8:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Freddie
Date: 9/22/2017 11:47:00 AM
Lovely piece, a tribute to words unsaid and the love they portray--best wishes for a win, Joseph!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 9/22/2017 11:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Joseph...straight to my favs
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks for making it a fave Tim
Date: 9/22/2017 11:01:00 AM
A very well written Rondeau, Joseph. It expresses such deep sadness that reaches the reader, too.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 9/22/2017 10:40:00 AM
Love the Title Joseph, so happy you had plenty to say, in weaving this wonder..
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Harry
Date: 9/22/2017 10:36:00 AM
Hi Joseph, You captured the "feeling " of words left and said. You wrote a good piece in the" Rondeau" form. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 9/22/2017 10:23:00 AM
I love the feel of this piece. My best to you in the contest :) xomo
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Maureen