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Word Morph- Warm To Fine Pleas

WARM to me my love,do not cool WARE am I,you made me your fool FARE no further for I fear FIRE extinguished by one tear- FINE words might yet..ope your ear

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Steve Meadows

Date: 7/18/2009 11:16:00 AM

very well put. cehck out some of my poems

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/25/2009 3:10:00 PM

Congrats in your HM, your creative heart shines bright in your realm of short form...Raul

Monique Mcdowell

Date: 1/24/2009 9:54:00 PM

Great word morph Brian and congratulations on you placing in the contest. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my word morph. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. ~Mon-i-Que

Constance La France

Date: 1/23/2009 5:30:00 PM

Very nice poem... i really, really like it.. congrats on your win..Constance

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/23/2009 4:06:00 PM

This is a lovely poem, Brian. Congratulation on your win! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2009 1:19:00 PM

I remember this one, and thought at the time, it will be among the winning poems! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/23/2009 12:34:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your win in Nigel's contest. An awesome morph! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/7/2009 2:18:00 PM

Nice word morph. I tried one and it took me several hours...Raul

Michael Torres

Date: 1/5/2009 5:08:00 PM

Nicely done Brian little emotional passion here. GBU Michael

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/5/2009 4:30:00 PM

Great Morph poem. Thanks for your remarks on my offering in your contest. I enjoy the challenge, thanks for sponsoring them. Love, Joyce

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/5/2009 8:19:00 AM

A Morh , within a rhyming piece , well done Brian ....

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2009 8:09:00 AM

Excellent morphing, Brian! ...She is a fool if she doesn't respond to such tender words. :) Thank you very much for placing my poem, Winter Tears, in your contest!! And thank you for the challenge...looking forward to others in the future! ~ Blessings..love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/5/2009 6:47:00 AM

Aw Brian, no doubt these words will melt her heart. Well done! Thank you dear man for the great honor of placing me in your contest. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/5/2009 3:18:00 AM

Such a longing and deep write, Brian, well done! Love, Kristin

Laurie Ginn

Date: 1/5/2009 12:34:00 AM

ahhh Brian I do hope the fine words will open her heart for these are very fine words indeed. Nice job. Laurie