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Woman In The Moon

Through the clouds tonight, Lifts that veil— The face, in its shell; Behind groggy light, A man's oval eyes stare In a woman's grasp— Seen through without being seen, She rises every night With her craters' scars. They enchanted the air For innocence and touch— All of her lust.

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 6/23/2023 6:29:00 PM

I can almost feel the healing in your words. Another very deeply emotional write. "With her craters' scars" Monumental line in four words! Warmly A.S.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/16/2023 2:19:00 PM

I like what you see of the unseen, Paige. Luminescent. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 6/14/2023 9:32:00 PM

Moon, when she rises from the veil of clouds is breathtaking. Sometimes we can spot the image of a woman within the moon . Beautiful poem, dear Paige

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/13/2023 6:56:00 PM

"Lifts that veil, seen through without being seen." This image reminds me of a woman on her wedding day. This is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts are breathtaking, Paige. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2023 4:30:00 PM

Love it! Very nice!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2023 2:58:00 PM

lovely to see the woman in the moon rather than the man, i find your poem is quite sensual Paige:-) hugs Jan xx