Woman

Woman World's most beautiful creature A vision of poetry in motion An apotheosis in satin and lace The ultimate in love and devotion Woman A masterpiece of charm and guile Perfection to the nth degree Few words can describe this beauty A quintessence of love is she Woman Primordial reaction is one of awe When viewing this creature divine The essence of love is all around her On the very edge of sublime Woman Carnal attraction between the sexes Can only describe this bliss The final union of body and soul As we tumble into the abyss

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/20/2018 9:22:00 AM

A beautiful piece Jack, such great imagery and passionate thoughts. Well done!, Blessings, Gordon

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/20/2018 8:02:00 AM

This Is a lovely piece Jack

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 9/17/2018 3:30:00 PM

Sweet and great write. Blessings.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/22/2015 3:32:00 AM

Immensely passionate are these lines! Love this kind of poetry! You've got many memorable lines here! "A vision of poetry in motion, An apotheosis in satin and lace The ultimate in love and devotion.." WOW! Stunning words. The last stanza is special too... wow! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/22/2015 8:35:00 AM

WOW! Did I write those lines!!! LOL You are such a sweetie, my dear Laura! The day we connected was a momentous day in my life! I love you dearly! xxxxx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/9/2012 5:51:00 PM

Jack I'm glad to be the first to comment on this wonderful beautiful poem. It shows you are a man that knows how to appreciate a woman. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2012 7:07:00 PM

"a man that knows how to appreciate a woman" I sure do that, my friend! LOL Love and big, big hugs, Jack xxxxxxx