Without Red Paper and Candy

He doesn't bring her flowers,
Nor say much on Valentine's day,
For he was flipping a house to sell and
Give her her dream home one day.

Grubby and dirty he kissed her,
Curled up on the couch with a book,
She, with the cats, lie on his shoulder,
In comfort, in quiet peace, just looked.

"Will you be my Valentine", she whispered,
And he lay down the story he was reading.
"I have been your Valentine since the first moment I saw you,
And you are mine without red paper and candy."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:38 PM
well, hey, I would rather have the dream house too, but I don't get that OR the candy. hahaha. (actually this year I actually got chocolates from him!) Love this, Sunlite.
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Aww how sweet sunlit... we never celebrate with cards and stuff like that I don't need one day a year to express my love:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 1:53 PM
There's a sushi advertisement just below your poem, what a turn off after reading such sweetness...
Wanter Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Haha! I do wish they could get rid of those middle of the page ads! Thanks for your sweet comment. A Valentine chocolate heart to you!
Craychee Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Romantic. My wife would still want a card. ??
One Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:38 AM
so sweet and simple, that is what love is..
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Victor is right, we don't need the card companies to tell us when to love. Great verse Sunlite. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Aww - that is very sweet, Sunlite. Marvelously penned. Much enjoyed.
Thomas Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:29 PM
This is so very beautiful Sunlite. So very...
Talbot Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Inspirational, you'll see, Thank you, best wishes... Mick
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