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Within the Depths of Thy Heart - Repost

Oh, golden heart, speak now in love's embrace, surrender to the passions, thy words convey, take mine hand, within dream's endeavour, within thy golden heart, images of love arrayed. I swim through gentle chambers, of passion's flame, mine soul, ever to sing in joyous praise, oh beloved heart, that doth make my desire's, true light, shine golden in thy depths, through love's passionate breath. Divine thou doth shine, within star's brocade of lace, oh, heart that sings love's joys, thy depths sublime, I lay mine head within thy golden love, now, within thy heart's dreams, I rest in love's repose. Within thy heart, desires ever displayed, thy glory shines, as doth the golden sun, golden the dreams, that we shall ever share, deep within the great depths of thy heart.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/18/2019 2:07:00 PM

Mike, each stanza can stand alone with its romantic beauty. Glowing in golden light your words sing of the hearts desires. A Fave for me my friend! I have been away visiting my granddaughters and have not had much time for poetry since I got back home. Catching up on mail and email etc. I hope you have a lovely weekend and week. xxoo

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 5:14:00 PM

Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by, the fav and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am sure you had a wonderful visit with your granddaughters |Connie. I have just come on today after being off for another few weeks. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/18/2019 7:44:00 AM

You sing well my friend. I hope the music within your heart never ceases. Blessings Mike.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 4:57:00 PM

Hi Richard, I do try to sing well at all times. The songs always seem to be there, within my mind. As long as they are I shall keep singing. I shall start posting later tonight or tomorrow. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always....Mike.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/15/2019 8:38:00 PM

So refreshing to read this today Mike, brings me back to a kinder and gentler time! Few write Romanticism like you...ok no one writes like you, and we love it!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 6:26:00 AM

Hi John, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I shall ever write what the heart dictates my friend. I love to write in an older fashion. I do wish I did it more on the soup. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. I do appreciate your words very much John.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:29:00 AM

- This beautiful poem, creates a loving and warm atmosphere - A big piece of your heart, my friend Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 6:08:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I love to sing from the heart Anne-Lise, letting the love flow simply, as I always do. Sorry, it has taken me a while to get back to you. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/17/2019 6:36:00 PM

Indeed! The beauty and romance inspired by your stirring pen does send gently chambers a flutter, Mike. Such exquisite imagery sings of the ecstasy of golden love and passionate desire. It’s such a pleasure to read your magnificent poem that reaches the heart and soul so deeply. A fav! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 5:55:00 AM

Hi Susan, thank you for dropping by, the fav and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked this piece, for it is the first poem in your poetry series. Love is always singing within the heart. You know me Susan, I always love to let the heart sing. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2019 7:01:00 AM

You do romance so well Mike. It is a golden thread that is weaved through all your writing.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 4:58:00 AM

Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Love is always singing within my heart my friend and I always love to let the heart sing. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.