Within My Blood

I enter my primeval room lit with candles from an ethnic sanctuary, and revisit the mural of ancestral stories where horses and men flock to graze the oracles of generational chants along a temple of ceremonies fed by rituals now slowly molding in my mind… the old folk confessions and communion of decades cycled and recycled by a rare history: parables marching back to fables of peace -gongs and Asian warlike drums claimed by time, claimed by my elder's rice wine, that marrow against marrow my flesh entwines among brave natives -- brothers of protection...mothers who nourish homes as this ancestry cascades unto next heirs of heirs of children like myself bequeathing ruins and triumphs from wise old souls, from our men’s legends… and as the candle drifts, my origin's history floods these veins: I climb into life’s inner roots and there my great forefather dwells inside my blood... feisty, gentle, life-giving: that somehow, I carry his heritage today, I am his blood. John Hamilton's Ancestral Roots Submitted 6/10/2017
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Hamilton Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Congrats on a great win!
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June 13, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Beautiful. Very gracefully written. Congrats on your win.
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December 13, 2015 at 1:07 AM
This poem lacks nothing. So impressed and awed am I that I don't know how to tell you. It was sheer pleasure reading it and appreciating it is still a pleasure. I'm giving you a 107 and putting in favs (it may just look like a 7, but add infinity actually. WOW ... CayCay
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December 10, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Nette, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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December 10, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Nette, Congrats on your wonderful and sweet win. LINDA
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December 9, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Very wonderful write nette.. congrats on great win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 1:47 AM
Nette, your poetry is always impressive. I enjoyed the depth of emotion I felt while reading these lines. The captcha even said CRY. 7
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December 8, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Stunning , loved the flow of this poem! If I may say, Bloody good!
Pinet Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:59 PM
An pulse of raw emotion that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page with bravado. The descriptive wording and the great imagery brought it all to life with stark reality. Emile. #7
Ongado Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 12:23 PM
I am fond of tracing my family tree, hence, this stirring poem leads me to embrace my own personal heritage!
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December 8, 2015 at 9:58 AM
A 7-plus, for sure, Nette! This dramatic, profound poem reminds us of the undeniable importance of ancestry. Janice
Meade Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Well done . . . in our fast paced life we sometime lose sight of the past . . . to take time to be silent in the sacred places allows us to be filled with the past -- we feel it in our life blood flowing through our heart!
Marty Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Dear me, an excellent poem with nostalgic images. You do honor your roots and are proud of an ancestry that makes you who you are now. This speaks of your deep connection with your lineage!
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December 8, 2015 at 8:30 AM
- What a tale, Nette ..... bravo !!! - Good luck ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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