Within and Without

Within the boxed confines
of ancient wood and plaster
waking, sleeping, dreaming in solitude
Only the cats soft purr
and frisky nature seeks to scatter the
dust bunnies which hide at sunrise.

Within the box of mind
or the box of heart
daily I peer outside of myself
through a pixeled frame of light.
The ingredients of my day
the passion of my night
all congeal in a broth like fractal art
spicing the tendrils of thought.

The mind mixes and blends friends
a genetic sea of salt and water minds
bubbles and boils and become. 
~Without this soup you see
there could never be a universal we.
I would remain an eye without thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim
Scholtz Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie
Minardi Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Really loved the last two lines, Debbie. Congrats on the win :)
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February 24, 2012 at 4:04 AM
Well done many congrats on your win xx
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 11:05 PM
congrats Debbie on a great win for true words about our special site for poetry luv.. feeling the same as we all do relate ...
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 9:49 PM
this is the most artistic of the winners. Congratulations on an awesome one, Debs.
Johnson Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Soup mail Debbie.
Johnson Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 7:10 PM
This is wonderful. Congratulations Debbie.
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Debbie congratulations on your win, thanks for supporting my contest..David
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February 19, 2012 at 12:52 PM
very nice lines in this poem good luck in contest ~always p.d.
Goff Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:56 AM
intense introspection....I understand....lovely! jimbo
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