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Within and Without

Within the boxed confines of ancient wood and plaster waking, sleeping, dreaming in solitude Only the cats soft purr and frisky nature seeks to scatter the dust bunnies which hide at sunrise. Within the box of mind or the box of heart daily I peer outside of myself through a pixeled frame of light. The ingredients of my day the passion of my night all congeal in a broth like fractal art spicing the tendrils of thought. The mind mixes and blends friends a genetic sea of salt and water minds bubbles and boils and become. ~Without this soup you see there could never be a universal we. I would remain an eye without thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie
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Date: 2/24/2012 7:35:00 AM
Really loved the last two lines, Debbie. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:04:00 AM
Well done many congrats on your win xx
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Date: 2/23/2012 11:05:00 PM
congrats Debbie on a great win for true words about our special site for poetry luv.. feeling the same as we all do relate ...
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:49:00 PM
this is the most artistic of the winners. Congratulations on an awesome one, Debs.
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Date: 2/23/2012 7:11:00 PM
Soup mail Debbie.
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Date: 2/23/2012 7:10:00 PM
This is wonderful. Congratulations Debbie.
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:19:00 PM
Debbie congratulations on your win, thanks for supporting my contest..David
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:52:00 PM
very nice lines in this poem good luck in contest ~always p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:56:00 AM
intense introspection....I understand....lovely! jimbo
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