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With Violet Comes the Dawn

with Violet’s dawn her gentle kiss ignites flame sky reflects passion the sleepy sun awakens as Sapphire’s night bids adieu

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Date: 8/8/2022 8:07:00 AM

Ahh!! A very descriptive and creative Tanka that you have composed in this one. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/8/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Sara xxoo

Date: 7/17/2022 11:20:00 AM

I always enjoy personification. You did well to use it. Congrats in my contest.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/17/2022 3:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea xxoo

Date: 7/16/2022 4:00:00 PM

Love the imagery is this contest entry, Mike. Good luck. Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/17/2022 3:15:00 PM

Thanks Bill!!

Date: 7/10/2022 3:05:00 PM

Twilight has always captured my soul’s delight Mike. I know Andrea will just love this entry. It is gorgeous! Blessings xxoo

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2022 4:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie xxoo

Date: 7/9/2022 9:03:00 PM

Perfect imagery. Reads as if written by a true classicist!! Bravo, gw

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2022 4:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Gw!!!

Date: 7/8/2022 11:24:00 PM

Oh wow, this is so good Mike,

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Harry!!

Date: 7/7/2022 2:55:00 PM

Hello Mike Gentile, lovely poem, i can vision the scene in the sky. Happy Thursday. xxxx-oooo. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2022 11:53:00 AM

Hello Mike, Happy Friday. Enjoy your weekend. xxxx-oooo. Darlene

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/8/2022 4:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Darlene, Happy Thursday xxoo