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Jan. 13. 2025
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With Love- POTD

Your warm touch turns me a blossoming flower Your love lit eyes hold the depth of an ocean Your presence, a soft caress in my bower May I stay by you in endless devotion. Through trials of life, you stand like a tower. In life, you’re careful to proceed with caution. With daring, you face the challenges of life. Happy and contented I am as your wife. With each passing year, our love steadily grows. With every breath, our intimacy strengthens. My dear, in your company, I feel so close Even in darkness, our love blooms and brightens. Life, through trials and joy, like a river, flows. When you are by my side, my burden lightens. You are not just my partner, but my close friend. All I wish is that our deep love should not end.
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on POTD with your lovely ottova rima! With each passing year, our love steadily grows. With every breath, our intimacy strengthens...yes, that is the loveliness of the ups and downs of married life.
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 8:10 AM
Valsa, my dear, artfully expressed. Those words are lovely and sincere and brimming with love. Yeah, great job on POTD! Truly motivating and encouraging. Abounding with tenderness and affection! Blessings Dearest Friend.
Jones Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 11:20 PM
Beautiful work Valsa! Your placement in Brian Strands contest and a potd I missed is amazing! Congratulations on a lovely poem that evokes feelings of happiness, warmth and belonging!
Bangalee Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Oh, great. That's the love for which heaven is also jealous to acquire. Great poetic writings on love. It's nice to read. Congrats on POTD.
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:58 AM
Dear Mahtab, so happy to see you after a long break. How are you dear friend? Hope you keep fine. Thanks a lot for liking my poem.
Nicole Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 7:01 PM
' Even in darkness, our love blooms and brightens. ' And that's the way it should be, my dear friend. This is beyond beautiful. It's tender, romantic and written from the depth of your heart. Many wonderful blessings to you both. Congratulations Valsa, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:56 AM
Dear Brandy, your sweet words are always a delight to me. Thanks a lot for taking your time to comment on my poem. Hope and wish you a happy and peaceful year ahead.
M  Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 2:48 PM
A wonderful poem of love Valsa….Congratulations on POTD! Debx
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Dear Deb, thanks a lot for your kind visit and comment.
Gifford Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Beautifully written, Valsa. Congratulations on your POTD win, my friend. Have a wonderful rest of the week.
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Hi Zyrool. Thanks a lot, dear friend. Your nice comment is much appreciated.
Narain Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Valsa ji, nice poem. Congrats on getting POTD recognition.
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:47 AM
Thank you so much dear friend for coming to my poem again.
Rodgers Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Dear Valsa, Your artistic words are truly beautiful, heartfelt, and full of love’s essence! Congratulations on POTD! So inspiring and uplifting. So full of sweetness and love! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:46 AM
Thanks a lot dear Daniel. So happy hearing from you after a fairly long gap. Hope you keep fine. Sending you love and blessings !
Tor Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Valsa back again to congratulate you for receiving such a a High Honor of POTD. Your passion and love is felt in this lovely Poetry of yours. Much deserving of the Honor it received. God bless you and keep on writing...
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:44 AM
Dear Michael, thanks a lot for your second visit. I am so delighted by your lovely comment. Stay blessed dear friend.
Wolf Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Love the love and the sweet rhymes, Valsa. Way to go on POTD. Hearts and flowers, Gershon
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:42 AM
Thank you so much dear Gershon. Glad, you liked my poem.
La France Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Valsa, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~
George Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:41 AM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for your Congratulations!
Read Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your wonderful POTD God bless you. xx
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:59 PM
Thanks a lot John for your kind visit and blessings. Sending blessings to you too.
Sands Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations for POTD :)
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:57 PM
Thanks a lot dear Heidi.
Fowler Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Oh so soft and sensuous dear Valsa. Congratulations on POTD! :)
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:56 PM
Dear Linda, thanks a lot for your Congratulations and comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on POTD. A great poem.
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Thanks a lot dear Victor for your second visit.
Kitchin Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Valsa, a beautiful love poem, congratulations on POTD.
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Thank you so much dear Tania.... ! Sending you love.
Jones Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 3:15 AM
“Your warm touch turns me a blossoming flower Your love lit eyes hold the depth of an ocean Your presence, a soft caress in my bower May I stay by you in endless devotion.” These opening lines engage and keep you riding that wave of love! What a beautiful write and how lucky you are to be blessed with the love of a lifetime! Congratulations on a much deserved potd Valsa!
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Thanks a lot dear Karen. Though we have difference of opinion, both of us are ready for compromise. That makes our love stay. Hope God will let us continue as lovers and long time partners.
Seeker Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Wow! What a beautiful tribute to the undying, radiant love between you and your spouse. Warmest congratulations on POTD with this heart warming write, Valsa.
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Fortunately we had a smooth relationship so far. Of course there were minor dissensions, but we were always eager to patch up before going to bed. God works and I am ever thankful to Him. Thanks a lot dear Seeker friend for your congratulations and lovely comment.
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:56 AM
- Back with congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:26 PM
Thanks a lot dear Anne for your second visit. Stay blessed. Hugs....
Edmonds  Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:54 AM
A beautiful tribute to the love of your life Valsa. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:25 PM
I never expected that this would become POTD. I am thankful to you, dear Beryl for joining me in my joy.
Greenhough Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:47 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This poem is special ..
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Thanks a lot dear Hilda.... !
Cunningham Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:31 AM
Back with congratulations to you Valsa on today's POTD honour, congratulations. Tom
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Incredible! How you always become the first to know of my POTD and congratulate me before any one does. So, I assume you have a great role in selecting the POTD. Thanks a lot. Yesterday I was out and so I missed seeing this honor.
DiMino Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 8:27 PM
I don't believe it will end...such love goes on forever. Absolutely precious poem! Brava!!
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:16 PM
Thank you so much Joe. May your affirmation that our love will not end prove right. It is my hope and prayer.
Narain Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Lovely romantic poem. A love which is divine.
George Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Thanks a lot dear Jay ji. Yes, that way I am fortunate. I know how deeply you miss your loved one.
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