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With Light, We Emanate

Light, it's captured in our minds Requirement? we use daily By whom? humans and creatures Just where would we living be without it? Written in the new 'Parise Pariku' form.

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Date: 1/10/2011 10:42:00 PM
this was a fantastic read. very interesting...but very much a treat for the human mind, a bit of light in its own right. well written. --Madison
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Date: 1/6/2011 11:43:00 AM
Good write for the contest. For better consideration, I suggest you make the following corrections: In the third line for grammatical purposes, change "who" to "whom". Your third line also contains eight syllables-one too many. How about replacing "animals" with "creatures"? In the last line, replace "us" with "we" , remove the comma, and place a question mark at the end of the line.
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:53:00 PM
Good one..Should be a winner..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 8:58:00 AM
We would all be solid frozen masses James ! Great write dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:01:00 PM
Good question hey, but we still take it for granted at times.. ~ Wilma
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Date: 12/31/2010 10:57:00 AM
Brilliant, James! Without light there would be no life. A winner for sure. Love you, Carolyn
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