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With Feline Grace

Her grief was dark and devastating But she grew strong through the years Refusing to shut down, she carried on All the groundwork had been laid It hadn’t been a total surprise Just an inevitable dreadful letdown An ensuing deep throbbing painful void One day she saw him again after many years He’d since become a widower They had that and more in common For years they had mingled as couples They both had so much to talk about So many tears and laughs to share Never tiring of each other’s fond memories So long deprived, he warmly held her hand His attentiveness was so comforting we understood As Mom somehow found the ghost of Dad in his warm touch AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 3, 2018 for contest FREE VERSES ON SADNESS sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 3/7/2018 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line, enjoyed reading ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/5/2018 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win. This is very touching and real.
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Date: 3/5/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/5/2018 6:34:00 AM
oh the ghost of dad's warm touch..so deeply profound and sadly beautiful. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Laura. Most appreciated. Thank you for hosting this great contest.
Date: 3/3/2018 7:54:00 PM
I agree with Janece; a very poignant well written write! Good luck in the contest Line!~Che :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cheryl. Appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 3/3/2018 4:32:00 PM
Two sad hearts finding comfort in each other. Very compelling write, Line. Should do great in Laura's contest.
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:40:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind comment Janece.

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