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There's a gonna be a crimson moon tomorrow night... Me and Delroy, heading down Witcher at half past midnight. Our destination: Witcher Redemption Church of Christ. It's been pouring like crazy since ten. Lightning streaks are giving the church steeple with its twenty foot cross an eerie aura, as rumbling thunder shakes the ground beneath our feet. Fueled by a bottle of Jack shared and a hatred for the evil that has taken place here, our intent is to burn this unholy building to the ground. Two bricks and two molotovs hurled at and through the stained glass windows should do the trick. Just last week ol' Rev King was convicted of molesting three underage girls over the past twenty years. To think that he stood on that pulpit preaching fire and brimstone at us turns my stomach. It was Del who suggested we torch the place, his sister was one of the victims. It's now 12:59 am. The rain has slowed. My heart is pounding in my ears between roars of thunder. On the count of three we take our vengeance. One... Two... Three... Crash Crash! Windows successfully busted. Molotov cocktails lit and hurled on target. Flames rising. Victory! But wait! Silhouettes approaching from the woods just beyond. Suddenly, a lightning flash. Three, no, four black bears loping toward us at great speed. Our demise, imminent. Our destiny, sealed. My only thought now is this: What horrid twist of fate has led to this judgment? O GOD, PLEASE HELP US... twisted happenings mothers of the disappeared weep baptisms delayed * Poem/story inspired by a road and church I passed recently and the television series Zoo. Also a nod to a U2 song. Events are fictional.

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Date: 2/26/2025 11:10:00 AM
Wow, this one is intense! It has that raw, gritty, Southern Gothic feel with a stormy atmosphere, dark justice, and an eerie, almost supernatural twist at the end. The imagery is vivid--the crimson moon, the eerie lightning-struck steeple, the roaring thunder--and the tension builds beautifully toward the fiery act of vengeance. The haiku at the end adds a haunting final note, hinting at sorrow, loss, and unfinished reckonings.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/26/2025 11:11:00 AM
A darker offering to be sure. Glad you liked it
Date: 2/22/2025 3:58:00 PM
Twenty foot cross I would think an abomination, make folks run! Incoming demon alcohol, (wagging index finger side to side) at dirty-deeds. Poignant with a real message, Tommy! All need to heed, let God be the judge of that molester and meanwhile be kept in a prison in Earth's kingdom, 'till then. ~blessings
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/22/2025 5:43:00 PM
On our way to Florida we actually passed a Witcher county road and I thought then there had to be a story there. This one really has no moral lessons. More like being in the wrong place for the wrong reason at the wrong time
Date: 10/21/2024 4:54:00 AM
I have always enjoyed your haibuns. This is no exception. Indeed this is a frightening tale and your imagination is soaring high. As a true Christian it is natural to feel a kind of moral indignation when a priest who from the pulpit gives sermons on values demean himself by indulging in shameful acts. It is natural to avenge him. But destroying a church is unpardonable. No wonder fate took a horrid twist.. A story intriguing full of suspense.
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/21/2024 5:07:00 AM
Appreciate your commentary Valsa
Date: 10/8/2024 12:46:00 AM
Wow Tom, your imagination is intense in this write and yes so many holy men of the cloth do deserve what you did, I despise priests who do this but it happens in every religion and punishment should be due, but guess hell was now your destiny - magnificent write. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/8/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thx for visiting my little corner of the Soup Jen
Date: 10/4/2024 10:49:00 PM
A twisty one woody..' i m still in the rorest here Too many trees to count.!! True life can be Strange enough..' Without subjecting me too This lol))) mind you there is always sadiq khan Dang!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/5/2024 5:34:00 AM
Haha. Well some things I read in the news are even more bizarre than this. Thx Joe
Date: 10/4/2024 12:19:00 PM
You have always been good with the haibun form and again here also... It's a gripping write..
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/5/2024 5:35:00 AM
Gripping rocks!
Date: 10/2/2024 4:12:00 AM
Hey missed a few of your writes I see. You haven't been posting on FB that's why. This must be the scary one you told me you were writing? As always Tommy you never fail to disappoint and this one coupled with fact and fiction to send the imagination soaring is yet another gem. A great Haibun leaving your readers wanting more....Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/2/2024 5:33:00 AM
I'm glad you liked my little tale of terror. Thx Maria
Date: 9/30/2024 10:11:00 AM
What you witness dwells in your soaring imagination and is nourished by your artistry and your profound perception of what you see, hear and feel.. You adorned the story with the amazing form of Haibun and you offered a savouring read to your avid reader.. So happy to be here and read you, Tom.. always an immense delight! God bless you. My best regards.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/30/2024 10:19:00 AM
You're always welcome on my page Besma. Good to see you again!
Date: 9/30/2024 8:48:00 AM
lights, camera...suspense! you're getting good at this genre, tom...power on!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/30/2024 9:00:00 AM
Of course, it's tough to expand in this little space. Thx
Date: 9/30/2024 7:00:00 AM
This is fantastic Tom. "twisted happenings, mothers of the disappeared weep baptisms delayed," the ending of your poem is so powerful. This whole poem speaks so much truth with so much depth.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/30/2024 7:13:00 AM
Haha. I thought you might like this darkie. You might enjoy wizards of destruction if you get a chance
Date: 9/30/2024 1:49:00 AM
One should never condemn a religion because of an evil preacher. Unfortunately such is the world's condemnation.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/30/2024 5:36:00 AM
It's just a story. No commentary meant. At least I don't think
Date: 9/29/2024 6:08:00 PM
un poème passionnant, presque irréel, enjoyed a lot best wishes poète
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 6:35:00 PM
Merci
Date: 9/29/2024 5:25:00 AM
Huh instant judgement, karma as some call it. Reads like a short story which I enjoy! Did you use any symbolism in this tale? Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 6:01:00 PM
No not really. Just a hard luck story for everyone ala Stephen King
Date: 9/29/2024 12:35:00 AM
Dear tomsz, events can be fictional in this write but we see this happening in so many places especially i felt the lines “ Just last week ol' Rev King was convicted of molesting ten underage girls over the past twenty years. To think that he stood on that pulpit preaching fire and brimstone at us turns my stomach” unfortunately this is a familiar case that youv described and it makes me sick too. Profound and so very detailed descriptions throughout this powerful write! You are a natural with storytelling and I absolutely loved reading this! Evil lurks everywhere! Sending you light always
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Inky. I'll have to do something lighter for my next lol
Date: 9/28/2024 8:35:00 PM
A gripping tale of evil, with an ending that surprised me.You can't fight fire with fire, or rather evil with evil. Brilliant, thought provoking writing, Tom. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 6:02:00 PM
Much appreciated your comments Evelyn
Date: 9/28/2024 2:02:00 AM
I believe in love and God above religions not for me.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 1:54:00 PM
Rock on big J
Date: 9/27/2024 8:52:00 PM
He is crucified systematically... Well done dear Tom. Have a blessed weekend
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 1:54:00 PM
Interesting comment mu
Date: 9/27/2024 7:08:00 AM
I certainly enjoyed reading this. Evil lurks everywhere and vengeance also comes with a price.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/27/2024 7:11:00 AM
There are many kinds of evil in the world. One god inspires it all -2 Corinthians 4:3,4
Date: 9/26/2024 7:19:00 PM
Every action has a consequence, good or bad. God says that vengeance is His. So true. Your stories always have a lesson within, Tommy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/27/2024 9:07:00 AM
True, God had nothing to do with anything here. That verse came to mind and I wanted to share it. You're very welcome, Tommy. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/27/2024 6:36:00 AM
This was just a quirky story that came into my head. Pretty sure God had nothing to do with anything here. Thx so much for visit
Date: 9/26/2024 1:30:00 PM
Quite the creative write with an unexpected ending. Evil seems even worse when committed by someone trusted in the church.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2024 1:39:00 PM
The devil works in mysterious ways....
Date: 9/26/2024 9:01:00 AM
Alluring write that draws a person in and keeps their attention. Thanks for sharing this one with us. It wasn't the building that caused the terrible deeds that a human committed, but totally should be put at the feet of the person who committed the act/s. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2024 11:58:00 AM
Angry, drunk teens aren't likely to think straight. Thx for visit
Date: 9/26/2024 8:18:00 AM
Tom your creative mind was at work again. It was captivating to read. Deserving Retribution. With a twist in the end. Thank you for sharing...
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2024 8:42:00 AM
Darker than my usual. Thx Mike
Date: 9/25/2024 10:52:00 PM
Great story telling Tom, you leave the reader wanting more. Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2024 6:52:00 AM
We seem to share a gift for storytelling. Thx
Date: 9/25/2024 5:38:00 PM
A story of the betrayal of innocence by preachers, and those who would avenge those who were abused, and the twist of fate at the end, Well told
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2024 6:52:00 AM
An unusual story to be sure. Thx
Date: 9/25/2024 3:28:00 PM
Who knew there would bears guarding the place? I hope they gave you a heroes burial. Ha ha SuZ
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 3:43:00 PM
Lions would have been better but none to be found in the Smokies ;)
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