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how i long for the sound of summer thunderstorms and the roar of awakened clouds rumbling in the distance their sound of fury that never lasts too long lashing out in bolts of wrath and raging for unknown reasons how i long for summer rain its downpour drenching parched fields as well as desperate thirsty souls how i deeply long for the spectacle of unbridled summer ever reminiscent of my youth AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on October 20, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on October 18, 2022

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Date: 10/21/2022 4:05:00 PM
Lovely write here, so full of metaphors..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/21/2022 5:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nancy ~
Date: 10/18/2022 7:20:00 PM
Nicely done and well expressed, Line. Sending you blessings and a warm hug
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2022 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve ~
Date: 10/18/2022 4:18:00 PM
This is beautifully written Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/18/2022 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ~
Date: 10/18/2022 3:20:00 PM
I long for the rain too, it has been a long time coming, I guess I am one of those desperate thirsty souls~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/18/2022 3:40:00 PM
Yes, I totally understand Michelle ~

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