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Wishing Beneath a Red Umbrella

The fragrance of rain whiffs as our toes reel along a sidewalk bathing tresses herein; while nostalgic glances mark pain’s ordeal till openly bare, we talk eyes to skin. How words ripple around waking life’s fears of what new seasons could no longer hold— as mist of goodbye drowns with frozen tears when nightfall’s ink silences thoughts, quite cold. Beneath a red umbrella, we embrace this warm closure, your far trails unto sea allowing love’s resplendence its fine grace-- for blest is co-owned ardour through vow’s decree. If miles distant could bring us to this same spot where we could glaze the fields… never apart; let pour of fate twine these arms like a knot my umbrella a rune wrapping one heart! ---- For Eve Roper's The Red Umbrella Contest 11/9/2018

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Date: 11/20/2018 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 11/17/2018 12:32:00 PM
A lovely romantic poem Nette, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 1:09:00 PM
Such intimacy, so elegantly depicted. Congrats on your win in the contest! :) gw
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:31:00 AM
- A wonderful winning poem, Nette :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2018 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette..
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:26:00 AM
Nette, when you paint of romance your hues are most brilliant.. Your subtle brush here is exquisite! Awed...
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Date: 11/13/2018 10:59:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Nette, you had everything I was looking for. Great flow, rhyme and subject matter . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/11/2018 2:03:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Nette! Love your unique phrases to paint the picture in your poetry! :)
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Date: 11/10/2018 5:01:00 PM
Hello Nette … a lot can happen beneath a red umbrella and this case a vision of happiness and love - thank you Nette - Lindsay
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Date: 11/10/2018 2:07:00 AM
A beautiful, soft romantic vision you have painted with your words, dear Nette. Elaine
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Date: 11/10/2018 12:07:00 AM
Romantic and I like how you ended this, very creative!
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Date: 11/9/2018 2:36:00 PM
love this romantic gem
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:00:00 AM
Absolutely mind blowing poem, Nette:) love the ending line:)
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Date: 11/9/2018 2:57:00 AM
Beautiful romantic verse Nette, good luck. Tom
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:56:00 PM
Very nicely rendered Nette..Gl in the contest..
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Date: 11/8/2018 4:26:00 PM
Language of love in your wonderful style adorns this poem..I like your story and your take on the contest theme..Best for a win, nette.
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Date: 11/8/2018 3:16:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette, though I would expect nothing less from your pen. Your words drift on a soft breeze across the page always touching the reader in so many ways.
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