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Dreams Fade

You found your dream love as a naive youth. And asked God above, to confirm its truth. Yet that dream would fade as the years slipped by. But those feelings stayed and still make you cry. Breakups hurt too much, morphing into tears. And you crave love's touch, alone with your fears. Unable to cope, tears douse passion's flame. And imprison hope, deflecting the blame. Once doubt dims your light, love cannot find you. And strays far from sight when you're feeling blue. Don't dismiss dead dreams; their magic isn't through. Despite what it seems, they may yet come true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/1/2017 8:39:00 PM
Hello Emile, the last verse speaks to me.Because i do beleve that wishes can come true.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/2/2017 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2017 10:13:00 AM
Beautifully inspiring and heartfelt poem. Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 11/25/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/6/2017 12:04:00 PM
Your wonderful poem speaks for many Emile. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : )
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Date: 11/7/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Connie, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/3/2017 11:45:00 AM
Wishes do come true! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/2/2017 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations Emile for POTD honors...
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Date: 11/2/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/2/2017 4:52:00 AM
Congrats for the nice write! :) Sunita
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Sunita, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Date: 11/2/2017 2:08:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Date: 11/1/2017 8:27:00 PM
VERY SWEET
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Ashley, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Date: 11/1/2017 2:13:00 PM
It is really versed nice to the point of facts, emotion and feelings. Much respect.
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Abed, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Loved the flow and rhyming in this piece! Best, Judy
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Judy, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 11:27:00 AM
Nicely espoused, Emile. I am quite sure this fine poem of yours speaks for many people. Congratulations on receiving POTD - much deserved! My very best regards. :) john
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much John, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 9:45:00 AM
Quatrains sometimes can sound trite. You certainly rose above that in this lovely poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Sunlight, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD Emile. The last stanza is most uplifting giving hope...Maria
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Maria, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 7:01:00 AM
Wisdom penned beautifully by your skilled hand Emile, an excellent choice for Potd my friend, congratulations, the more you touch with this piece the better :) May your dreams come true my friend xomo
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, I truly appreciate your ongoing support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Emile. Good message.
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 6:15:00 AM
Emile, congrats on POTD. We must never give up hope.
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:18:00 PM
Thank you John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 5:06:00 AM
And they often do...Congratulations Emile...It's a lovely poem...
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Arturo, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2017 2:23:00 AM
Words do miracle... And you are doing here .. Congrats.. Isor
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Isor, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

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