Wish - Potd

No one is more hated than he who speaks the truth.
                             _Plato
Sanctify them by the truth , your word is the truth.
                             _John 17:17
"People of different wishes , same prayers to God
          And  living in the same cruel world.
                            _Quote by poet 

My best wish is to see peace in the world
Love all , it is  my daily prayer, poem and song.
I hear the voice of someone saying ,
"Now,  let us forget the wongdeeds 
Of some forefathers  towards other nations." 
Yes , yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes,yes, yes! 
It is a good wish , well received and approved.

Why do you still following 
Their wong footsteps?  
They died and left injust
World Operating systems,
You still bringing them to life
As  you continue using 
The same inhuman systems. 

Who is the fault brothers and 
Sisters of the world? 
Do you find  hard 
To change those  evil systems
To be equal with others? 
Imagine,  two qualified workers
Doing same job in the same Company,
One getting paid 
Five times than the other one...
Is that fair? 
Many issues still veiled, 
Well known by disadvantaged 
Societies of the World.

I can seem nobody 
In the eyes of some millions of people 
But I am a volunteer advocate 
Who reminds billions of people 
About few neglected things
Which continue killing millions 
Of people silently. 
Injust world operating systems are tools 
Of the devil to capture more souls.

My wish to you , 
Young people, it is the time 
To take some holy water
And clean the demoniac systems.
Use nice heavenly fragrance ,
Truth to remove the bad smells
All over the World. 
Yes, yes,yes, yes, yes,yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!
I am sharing my wise wish widely  as other
Young poets, pastors, professors, prophets, 
Doctors, and  advocates who care for others.

 My wish can be your daily 
Wishes or prayer requests.  
I see some usual things, 
Some groups of victims 
And of those playing victims 
To the called"International Criminal Courts."
Magistrates and juges 
Supporting  the majority
Of those playing victims 
And rejecting  the cries 
Of victims. 
  
    Like my wish as the truth was
             Shared world wide,  
       Work together to change 
            The wrong systems 
     For the benefits of All people. 
            Continue to love me
            As my love to you is 
               Unquestionable. 

               April 23/2023
  Written for poetry contest sponsored 
        by Constance la France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
Thank you so much for your visit and compliments You are welcome...dear Sara.
Narain Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Real nice poem. Congrats on your win. If you are from Africa, I would like to see some poems on people, wildlife, and culture. Thanks in advance.
Thank you so much for your visit and compliments. I am in Africa.... There are many poems about people , culture, fauna and flaura on this page..."in different poetry forms." Happy for your concern dear Jay. Your most welcome
La France Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Alfonso, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, good quotes !
Constance , you so much for the placement and compliments. Your most welcome
May Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Congrats on your win Alfonso
Thank you
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on this top win in Constance's contest. As I commented on your POTD, this is stunning and you have richly-deserved wins! :)
Thanks so much for your compliments and encouragement You are welcome
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 6:35 AM
- Congratulation, Alfonso :) - hugs
Thank you You are welcome
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 2:49 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Creative lines penned. Sara
Thank you for encouragement....Sara You are welcome
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 12:13 AM
Beautiful wishes. Congratulation Alfonso. Hugs
Thank you so much ...Maria. You are welcome
George Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Missed seeing your beautiful poem as poem of the day, dear Alfonso. It is an exhortation to all people of the world to stand together in unity and work for peace, equality and justice. Double congratulations on your POTD and first place win in the contest.
You are welcome , Thank you much for your concerns in this wide chout. Your comment said a lot , Senseful words , Dear Valsa.
Agustin Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so wisdom-filled, expressed well through your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
Your most welcome dear Beata. Thanks for your compliments and encouragement.
Alex Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:24 PM
I missed your beautiful poem on POTD. Congratulations!
Thanks for your visit and fine comment on this page. Happy to read this comment Your most welcome
Kauffman Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:06 PM
Alfonso, congratulations on your first place win! Nicely done! Blessings!
Thanks friend I receive blessings Your comment pleases me Your most welcome
Edmonds  Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Back to congratulate you on your top win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle
Thanks so much for your compliments and collobaration ...Belle. Your most welcome
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 6:11 PM
Hi Alfonso, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful evening my friend;-) Alexis
Thanks friend Your daily encouraging comments on this page are magnificent Your most welcome...Alexis.
Poet Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 5:30 PM
This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.
Thanks so much dear. You are among inspired poets of this Site. Your character is unquestionable Your most welcome
Volumes Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Who said I don't know a good poem when I see one ? Congrats my friend. Very happy that it was recognised as the great poem it is. Wish I could see the smile !
Okey...Just Smile...smiling with all the poets of PS. You were not born today in poetic World. You are one of the crowned seniors You deserve much respect in the poetic field. A pro poet can never hide Your most welcome
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Back with Congratulations on your "New" win. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great/blessed day..............
Wow ....Thanks so much, dear Paula. Your support on this page is well recognised. Your most welcome
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Well said Alfonso, the world surely does need peace, may your wish come true. Congratulations on your well deserved award for poem of the day. Belle…… (PS see my collaboration entry for Margaritas contest.)
Thank you so much for encouragement...Bellevue. I saw that collab and left comment early. Really Wonderful collab. Good luck in that contest
Meadows Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:39 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Thank you so much for your encouraging words You are welcome
Kitchin Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Alfonso, a great message, congratulations on POTD!
Thank you so much for your compliments... Tania You are welcome
Nicole Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Never be ashamed for standing up for the truth. Praying for change in our world, and for the better. Congratulations Alfonso, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
By reading your comment, I understand how a brave woman must be. Your support is well recognised....Friend. Your encouragement meant a lot to me. I still need to read more comments from you on this page. You are welcome
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Dear Poet, Congratulations on honour of POTD. Your poem expresses deep and profound thoughts - and your wishes for mankind who are unjustly treated, are exemplary. We understand what you are trying to convey to all of us - kudos to you for speaking from your heart. Best wishes ~ Mala
Thanks dear You got well my points of views and came in support. Your wise comment will stick on this post, for many readers to continue reading and understand it. You are welcome
Peck Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Dear Alfonso, Your poem is beautiful! Its cries are for all the people of the world treated unjustly. Congratulations on POTD!
May God bless you dear. Allow me to say " Our voices be heard" Thank you so much for this motivational comment on this page again and again. Your patience in life is well known. You are welcome
Anaya Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on POTD Alfonso II! A message to be cherished. Great quote and is going to my quotes! "People of different wishes , same prayers to God And living in the same cruel world—Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris. ~I Am Anaya
Sister Anaya, So Happy as that quote meant a lot to you. Smile and tears mixing up here, Your most welcome
Kauffman Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Wonderful wishes. And, yes, we can make changes from decisions made "yesterday." Congratulations on your POTD. Wise words spoken in truth. Blessings!!
Thank you so much dear It is my pleasure to hear your good decision...which is to change some things of yesterday that continue to penalise other people You are welcome
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