Winter's Retreat

Hear the sound of Winter's retreat trickling away beneath your feet. And gush into a swollen creek; where surging waters swiftly peak. Watch cascading waves wash ashore as time and tide play tug-of-war. And feel the ice packs crack and break as they shiver, quiver, and quake. Smell the sweet scent surrounding Spring, subtly clinging to everything. And taste the sweetness of the rain, easing Winter's cold grip of pain. Although there are no guarantees, Hope is hitched to a tepid breeze. And expectation starts to bloom, as Sol’s light brightens Winter’s gloom.
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Hankins Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Emile, sorry I missed that your poem had been selected as P.O.T.W. Congratulations to you because it is certainly deserving of this special award. Hope you are feeling better today!
Pinet Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your encouraging comments, my friend, Emile.
John Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 2:22 AM
Love this one, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Thanks, Andrew, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem and congratulations also on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~Constance
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Thanks, Constance, your contests always inspire me, my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile. The sound of water breaking free from the grip of winter ice is such an integral part of spring. You have put me right by a stream breaking free. Blessings for your spring!
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thanks, Sam, you've brought a smile to my day, my friend, have a good day, Emile.
Watt Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 5:57 PM
Emile, always a joy to read your poetic prowess, like a textbook to study and emulate. Enjoyed the thought of winter retreating and spring filling the void. Congratulations for your POTW, very deserving ~ John
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Thanks, John, you honor me with your words my friend, have a good day, Emile.
Ray Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 12:44 PM
really enjoyed this one and brings back Winter's in the frozen North....as i read this that hunger to see the first Robin bouncing across the lawn returned ...great job, loved this romp
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Thanks, Timothy, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Meadows Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Well done on POTW. A lovely poem.
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Jeanette, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Calasibetta Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTW! Happy spring! :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thanks, Paulette, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Sangster - K Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Hi Emile. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your "Winters Retreat" Saving this to my favs. Congratulations on the POTW. It's a beautiful piece and a well deserved win. Cheers Anne :-)
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 3:12 PM
Thanks, Anne, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 4:32 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Constance's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 1:57 AM
This wonderful poem is so brilliantly expressed Emile. A visual delight! It is so deserving of the honor of Poem of the Week. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate your comments. How is your book going my friend? Emile.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Outstanding poem Emile, you painted an excellent picture. Congratulations on the POTW. Blessings ~ Debra
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Debra, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Your poem is so lovely, Emile. I especially loved, "taste the sweetness of April-rain, dilute Winter's bittersweet reign..." Congratulations on First Place! And thank you for your beautiful comments on my poem :)
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Calasibetta Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Delightful with artistic imagery that paints a memorable picture. :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Thanks, Paulette, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Beautifully written. The picture is very beautiful. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Logan Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 3:07 AM
Where wind and ice play tug of war. Great line, Emile. There is beauty to be found in all seasons.
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Thanks, Jenna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Nicole Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 4:58 PM
A picture *is* worth a thousand words, and this graphic says it all. I'm embracing all "the flavors of Spring." This is beautiful in every way, Emile. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Thanks, Brandy, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Foster Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Taste the sweetness of April-rain dilute Winter's bittersweet reign. Your descriptions are captivating... Well written obviously... but so much more. Ann
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Thanks, Ann, you honor me, my friend, Emile.
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April 3, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Absolutely magnificent poetry Emile, the rhyme and rhythm, the picture you paint is wonderful. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Thanks so much, Belle, you have brought a day of sunshine to my day, my friend, Emile.
Baker Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your Poem Of The Week, Emile. This should do well in the contest. Your description of the struggle between winter and spring was engaging. Both had things they had to do and things they had to endure. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Bill, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. Your "Winter's Retreat" is a beautiful write. Winter is gone and spring is here. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day writing away....................
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Paula, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Kitchin Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Emile, a beautiful poem with gorgeous imagery, congratulations on POTW!
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Tania, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Lawrence Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful Emile … I love Feel hope hitched to a tepid breeze …. So wonderfully descriptive! Congratulations on POTW! All the best to you , Susan :)
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Stunning imagery Emile, winter just doesn't want to let go. Congratulations on POTW. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Miller Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 7:06 AM
This is beautiful Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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