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Winter's End

Slowly, so infinitely slowly Winter releases his frozen grip. Gradually the earth starts to warm only to be plunged back by icy storms that coat the world in white once more. Yet inevitably Spring begins to win as she warms the lands causing new growth. Snowdrops first show their charming faces with crocuses close behind sprinkling colour. Ice finally frees the frozen waters of the lake and tuneful drips of water strike rocks and soil. The dull greys of winter now fade away leaving golden sparkle of sunrays that smilingly beam. Causing birds to sing as they collect twigs and fleecy sheep's wool to line their nests. Busily the insects go to work pollinating and cleaning up. While the trout gleefully leap to grab a fat fly and with splash dive down. The lake gleams in a myriad of colours blues shot through with silver and purple. And Winter fades to a distant memory, near forgotten in the warm Spring days. written 01/17/2015 contest: Winter's End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 7:34:00 AM
Nicely written Shadow, congrats :)
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Date: 5/7/2015 6:37:00 PM
ty Ed hugs
Date: 5/5/2015 7:27:00 PM
Shadow, stopping back to read your lovely poem once more and to congratulate your on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/7/2015 6:36:00 PM
ty Sandra hugs
Date: 5/5/2015 3:04:00 PM
Shadow, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 5/7/2015 6:36:00 PM
ty Linda hugs
Date: 5/5/2015 11:00:00 AM
Shadow. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/7/2015 6:36:00 PM
ty Skat hugs
Date: 1/18/2015 10:25:00 AM
Shadow, I love the way you image Winter's transition into Spring. Your words really paint a moving picture for us to follow. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:43:00 PM
ty Sandra for a lovely comment hugs
Date: 1/18/2015 8:39:00 AM
I try and head somewhere each year to get a reprieve from the cold.
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:42:00 PM
the tropics sound most inviting the sun beaming down warming old bones hmm ty Rick hugs
Date: 1/18/2015 3:52:00 AM
Shadow, A most wonderful epic write here. The descriptive transition imagery captures the picture you want for this particular poem. Good Luck in the contest!! A Seven!! Best, Gary
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
ty Gary hugs
Date: 1/17/2015 12:40:00 PM
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Emile.
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:26:00 AM
ty so much Emile and nice to see you back hugs
Date: 1/17/2015 9:38:00 AM
I can hardly wait for winter to end! A lovely piece Shadow.
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:26:00 AM
ty Rick nor can I, oh to be warm again! I think next winter I will go a warmer climes hugs
Date: 1/17/2015 5:35:00 AM
Very colorful and descriptive work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..It is the heart of winter here but goes back and forth from winter to warmer..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:24:00 AM
ty Sara hugs

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