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A few years ago, I came upon a quaint little town in the middle of nowhere. I stopped my car, awed with the majestical scene before me. At that time, I wasn't writing poetry, but when I saw such an image of light on the snow, I was struck by inspiration. This is the scene as I remember it that day.
Through the trees the sunlight filters, glinting off the snow, caressing the water, while water falls noisily nearby. The water twists around, winding, the stream continuing on an endless path, while the rocks remain frozen, solid obstacles. The light is fleeting, so catch it fast, for it shimmers, waning, and the whole forest shimmers too. The snow clinging to the trees won't always be there; and as the sunlight wavers, frost falls soundlessly to the ground.

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Date: 1/12/2024 1:44:00 PM
Loveliness... you captured it
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/12/2024 5:13:00 PM
thanks, Paige! I appreciate you...have a splendid Saturday. hugs, Sara
Date: 1/11/2024 5:29:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts of the scene with us through your amazing poetry, my dear friend. Write On! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/12/2024 5:14:00 PM
I'm grateful for your visit, dear hubby, and for your never ending support, hugs, me :-)
Date: 1/11/2024 4:05:00 AM
Wow your words are so delicate and so vivid, like a wintry portrait that i would just dream away looking at; thats what you do in such eloquence. Show us what you see and your thoughts in such a poetic manner with magical and captivating wordplay. also i just wanted to pass my sincere condolences about the passing or your brother; i cant even imagine the pain ..: i hope to see you write about him: sending you light today and always. pleasure always reading your work. Fave this is for me
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/11/2024 3:42:00 PM
thank you, kind Ink, for your delightful words about my poem. Your comments are encouraging and mindful, for which I'm humbly thankful. Thank you for your condolences regarding my brother. Some days I miss him more than others. We were literally only 11 months apart so we were like twins in that respect. When he passed, a pieces of my heart and soul disappeared with him....but he inspires me to this day because he was a musician and artist at heart...much of what I write I dedicate to him in my heart.I'm humbly grateful for the fave. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 11:33:00 AM
You do have an eye for beauty my friend, what great poems come out of that, ...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:42:00 PM
awww, how mindful and sweet. Thank you...Have a pleasant evening, hugs. Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 10:06:00 AM
I can see you remember this moment vividly as that is how you have expressed it in our poem...an excellent arrangement of words once again... love this one..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:42:00 PM
thank you, Silent One....Yes, I do remember it...the images were just awesome. have a great evening, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 9:05:00 AM
Sara, you have created breathtaking Winter imagery! Mesmerizing to read as one is transported to such a lovely place. A perfect example of Free Verse!! happy Wednesday xxoo
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:43:00 PM
awww, thank you, Mike, for your uplifting words and comments. You made my day. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 9:01:00 AM
Nice imagery of winter wonderland.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:43:00 PM
thank you, kind Jay! appreciate you, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 6:35:00 AM
Sara, your portrayal of the winter wonderland is truly remarkable, showcasing both creativity and depth, dear Sara. The imagery you have crafted with the gentle touch of sunlight illuminating the snow, resulting in delicate glimmers, and the gradual transformation of frost into a picturesque painting is truly captivating.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:45:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto, for your uplifting and encouraging comments. I'm grateful you saw the images I created as a picturesque painting. Thank you. Wishing you the best, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful winter wonderland imagery Sara, images like that stay with you forever. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:44:00 PM
you're right, Tom, they do and did. :-) thanks for your visit and kind words. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 1/10/2024 5:47:00 AM
You make me swoon over these mystical phrases, gosh, what a stunning imagery you've woven here, dear Sara.. Absolutely whimsical and perfectly capturing the wintry aroma.. How beautifully you've described that scene with soft sunlight caresses the snow, creating soft shimmers and as the frost melts, a beautiful painting it has knitted on the poetic canvas.. You are an artist and also, I am enjoying these winter-themed writes presented by you, they should make a lovely series in a fairytale book!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/10/2024 3:47:00 PM
awww, thank you, Hiya, for your comments...they were as delightful to read as your poems. I liked 'knitted on the poetic canvas.' How descriptive. Thanks for the book idea...I'm grateful for you and your kindness. Have a splendid evening, Sara

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