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Winter Woes - Potd

Are you thinking of me tonight? I sit on the warm carpet in this mountain hut, in front of a blazing fireplace, where flames flicker fitfully and logs crackle in delight. Outside it's chilly cold, snow softly cover the land, owls seek shelter and warmth, while windowpanes are covered with frost that looks like a lover's lace. And you? Do you feel cold or warm? Are you thinking of me tonight? Outside of my inner self I feel the fire's comfort. Inside I'm as cold as the snow. Of what use are the burning embers? I prefer the welcoming warmth of your endearing arms. Give me your hot breath on my cold neck. Let me imbibe your fragrance even for one instant. You are so far away. When will you be back from work? You said in about half an hour or so, We will be together in the warmth. But are you thinking of me tonight?

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Date: 4/18/2021 3:24:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Victor ~ beautiful. The last lines really throw us for a loop ~most endearing
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Date: 4/14/2021 2:00:00 AM
Supreme my friend! A fave for me. So happy I didn’t miss reading this gem. A belated congratulations on your POTD honor Victor. This poem warmed my heart. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/10/2021 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations...very romantic indeed.:) Sunita UPD.
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Date: 4/7/2021 10:36:00 AM
Victor my friend congratulations on POTD - a wonderful write, Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:41:00 PM
Big congrats on POTD, my friend!
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Date: 4/6/2021 6:05:00 PM
"Are you thinking of me tonight ?" There is a tender longing within. A desire to be close. When the time is right, it will happen. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/6/2021 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, you deserve it it’s so well penned with a lot of imagery that’s makes even very touching. God Bless my Friend and my very warm wishes for you
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Date: 4/6/2021 2:53:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD. So well deserved. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:47:00 PM
Victor, Congratulations on POTD!! a very romantic poem! well done!
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:22:00 PM
- Back with congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2021 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Victor on POTD honors. John
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Date: 4/6/2021 12:14:00 PM
Victor, powerful imagery. I loved it.
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD dear vb! xomo
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Victor..
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:27:00 AM
dropping back with many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD Victor... with this wonderful winter woes... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:08:00 AM
A beautiful write Victor and I’m sure you’re in your lost loved one’s thoughts and will remain there forevermore. Congratulations on poem of the day... Belle
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Date: 4/6/2021 9:49:00 AM
You can sense the longing in your words, Victor. A beautiful piece deserving of POTD! Congrats! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:56:00 AM
This is lovely as always Victor. You never disappoint with your lovely poems. The imagery here is exceptional . Love the warm and tender feeling of this. Congrats on well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD... a poem full of emotions and that reads so well.. I hope you are well, nice to see you still penning...
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:17:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY with this beautiful poem of love, well done. God Bless _Constance
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:14:00 AM
A very warm, heartfelt poem. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:20:00 AM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful heartfelt poem, Victor. Congratulations on poem of the day. Hugs Eve
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