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Winter Wish Away From Strife

There was a man that wished to be a snowman. Winter came in with the impatient wind, approaching in by its downy grace; the man in the midst of it all, the snow read his mind. Excitedly, seized by the magic of nature, the crystalline snow envelops him up in snow gear: a carrot for a nose, corncob for a pipe; a perfect picture. Charcoal for eyes and a smile, two lilies for ears, and sticks for arms from the nearest tree. The wind snatched a hat and placed it on its head, a scarf and wrapped it around its neck; great feature a work of art that stole its heart. Rapture was he, until the clouds open wide, and the sun snuck through, he melted back to the man he was a life of strife and struggles. 12/26/2021

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Date: 12/27/2021 8:01:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 12/27/2021 6:07:00 PM
Life is sometimes coping with adversity. This piece reminds of that perfect write for the season Eve hope your doing fine my Dear....
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Date: 12/27/2021 1:28:00 PM
I enjoyed your story. You painted a nice picture.....Debra
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:59:00 AM
Its nice to have a chance to be a snow man, but sooner or later we become human again, with all our aches and strife So precious this little imagined moment of grace, much love dear friend, xo
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:30:00 AM
Our wishes are fleeting in this complex world~An interesting analogy~man/snowman. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 12/27/2021 4:15:00 AM
Sad that he came back with the same struggles and strife. You would think a brush with death would help him see life in a different light. Thanks for all your visits to my page. Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/27/2021 7:46:00 AM
Thank you , Sara, wouldn't it be nice if life was easy with peace. Hugs dear friend
Date: 12/26/2021 11:27:00 PM
But isn't that life. We pass from one strife to another. God will always be with us. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/27/2021 7:47:00 AM
Life is just another way of hell. Yes, he always is. Hugs and Happy New Year

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