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Winter Time

The white out doors is covered with fluffy snow, the cold winds will swirl and blow. The pretty flowers in my garden will not grow, there is no food for the old black crow. The bright candles have a pretty glow, they flicker and put on a dancing show. The winter months go by so very slow, there is no one out there to say hello.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/1/2024 1:28:00 AM

Lovely write Paula what a joy to read feels like a warm blanket of words awesome. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2024 9:25:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Winter Time" to be a lovely write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Valsa George

Date: 12/11/2023 8:35:00 PM

Paula, enjoyed your beautiful poem on winter written in monorhyme. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 8:18:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun "Winter Time" Rhyme write. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/11/2023 3:46:00 PM

I agree Paula there is never people out on cold winter days, we need each other, that i why I go for walks and talk to neighbors, Congrats on your win,

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 8:17:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Winter Time" write. It is good to get out in the winter months. I love the cool air. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/11/2023 5:19:00 AM

"2 Place" ~ Winter Time~Date Written:12/8/2023

Len Gasun

Date: 12/10/2023 4:29:00 PM

Wow! This is so beautiful and the rhyming is so cool! I love your poem my dear poet friend, Paula and I enjoyed it very much this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing and Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Winter Time" write to be a beautiful write. Hugs... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2023 12:12:00 PM

Just returning to congratulate you on your placement my dear friend..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 5:32:00 AM

Great to see you back again. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Winter Time" write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2023 11:20:00 AM

This is cute monorhyming. I really like this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:31:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Winter Time" write to be a cute rhyme write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Silent One

Date: 12/9/2023 7:12:00 AM

Lovely rhymes my friend and you described winter perfectly.. Peace and blessings..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:30:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Winter Time" write. Also glad you found it to be a lovely rhyme describing winter perfectly. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/8/2023 2:43:00 PM

your poem was touching and accurate. You've beautifully captured the essence of those slow months. I liked bright candles have a pretty glow, they flicker and put on a dancing show. That's some awesome imagery. Stay warm, Ms. Paula. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Winter Time" write/imagery. Stay warm... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 1:21:00 PM

Excellent work, Paula, that was so poignant, expressive, and witty. Even in the dead of winter, Paula, take a stroll and appreciate the crisp air; this is a beautiful winter poem. You possess a linguistic ability that is at once tender and profound.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your kind words. Glad you found my "Winter Time" write to be excellent work/was so poignant. I love to walk when it is cold outside. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 10:40:00 AM

A bit of honey in this, Paula. 'Tis a rhyme, low--lo, okay, I need more honey. I enjoyed the visit++, have a blessed day, my friend. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:07:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun "Winter Time" write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2023 9:19:00 AM

- Go for a walk even if it's winter, Paula ... enjoy the fresh air ... a lovely winter poem :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Winter Time" write. Yes, I love to take a walk in the cool winter time. Hugs... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2023 8:56:00 AM

No snow in the South for Christmas but it's a wonderful monorhyme poem, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Winter Time" to be a wonderful monorhyme poem. Snow can be fun/none here. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2023 8:07:00 AM

Ahh!! We don't get snow much here, but I can imagine that it brings its own problems when it comes and hangs around. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2023 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Winter Time" write. The snow/ice can come with many problems. None here. Hooray... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/8/2023 7:59:00 AM

Winter Time~Date Written:12/8/2023