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Winter Storm

The wind roars like a lion As a sheet of snow, blows on by Dusting of white sticks to windows The weighed down bushes tip over Outside, there is a brewing war I walk, bting wind on my face, By the snowbanks climbing higher I hear loud scraping of plows The tree branches crack like gunshots Suddenly, blinded by white-out All the animals have hidden Parked cars are buried, pillowed mounds No time to keep up with shoveling The storm is whipping nature Then it slows, miraculous ways Change tames wind all around Smoke now seen from.the tall chimneys Light breaks through and the war is won 12/26/22 Entry for the winter storm contest. Sponsor : Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 12/30/2022 4:10:00 PM
Were you in the recent snow storm? It must have been terrible. Your poem is surely a winner. You describe a blizzard so perfectly. Best of luck! stay warm!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2022 6:05:00 PM
Yes, we had a bad snow storm. In fact , thousands in New England are still out of power. Thank your for your comments and encouragement :)
Date: 12/28/2022 4:04:00 AM
Reading your poem brought forth the images of the recent storm we experienced. Great details of frigid weather your write conveys. Best to you, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2022 6:15:00 AM
Yes Vijay. That is what the recent storm was like. Thank you very much :)
Date: 12/27/2022 9:12:00 PM
winter with rain bar/ displaying the coolness jar / biting cold warns here////
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2022 6:15:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 12/27/2022 8:09:00 PM
Majestic lines, Heidi... So, why do I long for Spring?! lol. (Not even January yet).
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2022 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate the beautiful views from the hill where I live this time of year, but I do love Spring. (But not the bugs, ticks and also caterpillar invasion last spring lol :)

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