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Winter Magic

How cold it was that one December day.
We’d put on boots and walked into the wood,
but in new-fallen snow, we lost our way.
As dusk began to creep, we understood
our peril, and our hearts were filled with dread!
Then something strange! Above a bank of snow
appeared a cardinal, bright cherry red!
As if the bird could tell us where to go,
we followed it, and to our great surprise,
we found a bench. Quite unbelievably,
on top of it we saw before our eyes
two mugs beside a red pot of hot tea.
Warmed by the drink, we kept hope in our sight.
The red bird led us home by fall of night!

Dec. 27, 2016
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Watt Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Andrea, I do love poems about hope, and Winter Magic gives one a sense of never giving up, even in the midst of our dread and unkind circumstances. Love the magic here, and the story you wove around the simple picture. Fantastic, a fav for me ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:33 PM
wow, thanks, John. it did not even win in the original contest it was written for!
May Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Lovely write Andrea...Congrats on your win
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 1:35 PM
That was a very smart red bird. I enjoyed this poem.I like the way the words flow.
George   Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 4:31 PM
wonderful sonnet. Andrea. Wishing you all the best in 2017. Elane
Lindley Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 10:45 PM
ONE OF MY TOP TEN FAVORITE BIRDS! Truly superb sonnet verses and yes Nature does work magic if one but believes. Top level sonnet-eering my friend. A7
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Delightfully magical, Andrea! I love the image of white snow everywhere and the splashes of red. Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 4:34 AM
- Andrea, thank you for this beautiful sonnet - I woke up to a winter wonderland yesterday ... but today it rained, no more snow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 3:00 AM
Such an amazing sonnet my very dear friend, Andrea! Embracing this superb piece and you! A 7++. Thanks for sharing! Wishing you the best always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Kannan Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Great sonnet... Loved it... Perfect Picture for the poem... A big 7...
Rycroft Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:05 AM
A fantastic poem Andrea well done, I loved it, you really know how to tell a story, xx
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 4:30 AM
Great poem by a creative genius! A great tribute to nature, the art of God. Best wishes, Adeniji.
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 5:03 PM
This is very enchanting, Andrea. Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve
Walker Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Beautiful poem, especially love the last line.
Pett Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Beautiful sonnet, a joy to read,
Horn Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 7:09 AM
AD, Have to go back and correct your name. Not Adrienne. Sorry. Cardinal is our state bird. Does Iowa actually have trees. I lived in Kansas once and they only had a few. Elm tree ones and they all died from a disease. jth
Hagy Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Such a great tale!!:)...I agree with many others here, mother nature has her magical ways, and you told this so beautifully! I have a pair of cardinals that come take peanuts off my fence...sooo pretty:)
Austin Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Mysterious and wonderful that someone looking after you. Love, Dave
Adams Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Great poem Andrea, when I'm unusually sad, my cat instinctively knows when I need love and will curl up in my lap !
Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Now, this one is a magical tale, loved it:)
Murray Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 5:15 AM
Being Irish I assumed the cardinal was in robes. And I love the tea of course Andrea. What a lovely winter tale.
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December 28, 2016 at 3:33 PM
What a great story and poem. I can see the red cardinal before the white snow! The first time I saw cardinals (they don't exist in my home country) was the winter we emigrated to the US - I found the bright red birds fascinating.
Leake Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Nicely Written Andrea, Animals seem to know, when were lost!!! Enjoyed your piece!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Lawless Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 9:16 AM
OH, Andrea, so very beautifully written taking us to the edge of danger and then into the "magic" of Winter. Well done.
May Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Wonderful story Andrea...Happy New Year!
Green Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 6:11 AM
What a beautiful winter adventure that captures the essence of the photo wonderfully
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