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Winter Gray

This winter has brought unrelenting gray Unlit gray sky is all I've seen for days Gray snow a relief From gray rain's dank grief Hurry, springtime - make the gray go away! 1/6/19 for Same Word Winter Limerick contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Date: 1/18/2019 10:41:00 PM
Michelle, fantastic ,very well written Limerick with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/18/2019 10:48:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Eve!
Date: 1/15/2019 7:50:00 AM
I couldn't agree with you more, Michele. Please snow snow go away lol. Great limerick! Congratulations on your win. :) Charlie
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/18/2019 10:49:00 PM
Thanks for placing me in your contest, Charlie!
Date: 1/15/2019 6:42:00 AM
Hi Michelle, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/10/2019 9:31:00 AM
O good! I tried my hand at this challenge and chose "gray" but just couldn't make it work! I see here that it was a good idea after all. Love that last line!
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:14:00 AM
We had a touch of Spring the other day now back to brrr!
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Date: 1/7/2019 4:35:00 PM
My feelings, exactly- well penned, my friend! ;)
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Date: 1/6/2019 9:21:00 PM
Wash it away! --- Oh, no! That's gray hair color. The last thing you want is more rain. What a faux pas on my part! LOL... Nicely done, Michelle. ~ Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:24:00 PM
I used to color my hair but my hubby likes the gray so I mostly leave it alone - happy you like this!
Date: 1/6/2019 7:22:00 PM
I totally agree , springtime should come quickly, gray gray go away come back another day, Nice entry Michelle, gl in the contest,
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:22:00 PM
Glad for your comment, Pixie Dust!
Date: 1/6/2019 5:38:00 PM
very well done. At first I thought this would be strange, this one same word on each line, but I have seen folks like you doing it really well.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/6/2019 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, Andrea!
Date: 1/6/2019 4:40:00 PM
superb piece requesting winter days to take a long leave ... i would want the same thing, michelle... huggs
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/6/2019 5:42:00 PM
Thanks, nette, wishing for more sun these days!