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Winter Globe

Silent flurries flutter down. My nose cold, cheeks warm. Whiteness gathers, explores, dusting sidewalks and my Christmas sweater. Cold angels in the snow, children giggle, flap their wings. Powdery-snow rolled into small, medium and large — a snowgent with smiling pebble teeth and a pointy orange nose. Snowbirds lift steel blades, gliding on the solid pond, as my snow tires make tracks — off to search for silver tinsel for my half-dressed tree. Vanilla-angel topper with warm cheeks.
solid gold panning of this Winter globe — warm and cold windows 12/5/2019 December or January Haibun Contest Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Crutsinger

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Date: 2/9/2020 4:27:00 PM
A great win to you. Snow can be sooooooo much fun. Hope Spring will be here soon..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/7/2020 4:04:00 PM
A delightful write, Kim. Congrats on your high placement. Blessings ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2020 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/5/2019 11:48:00 PM
Nice one, dear Kim... Enjoyed it. God bless you and best wishes for the contest. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/5/2019 1:39:00 PM
I so enjoyed the imagery you created are Kim! I shivered as I read it , Happy Thursday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 12/5/2019 12:56:00 PM
So vivid, especially like the contrast of 'warm and cold windows' - best wishes for the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 12/5/2019 8:44:00 AM
Love the imagery, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line!
Date: 12/5/2019 8:43:00 AM
I can read the cold of your words...well expressed...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!

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