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Animal, Bird, Wild Bird, Sparrow, Wild Animals, Season

I am a Winter child so I love snow, it is a delight to walk with snowflakes; I like it when the snow will dance and blow, and how a forest icy stream still snakes ! Today, a hundred birds it seems took flight, they were hiding in a small snow draped tree; it was a wonderous and special sight, such delight to see those birds filled with glee ! I would make snow angels as a young child, and ice skate on a homemade frozen pond; as my parents and grandma watched and smiled, born in a snowstorm so this the love bond ! Snow wraps his cold, cold arms to caress me; to touch my cheeks with fingers feathery ! ________________________ January 16, 2022 Poetry/Sonnet/Winter Delights Copyright Protected, ID 01-1422-135-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest ,Winter Wonders Within Nature sponsor, M.L. Kiser, Judged 01/23/2022 Third Place

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Date: 1/24/2022 7:49:00 AM
beautifully descriptive Sonnet Constance...congratulations :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2022 8:04:00 AM
David, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~
Date: 1/23/2022 9:16:00 PM
I love the softness of the light snow falling. Your sonnet is lovely Constance. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/24/2022 3:57:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 1/23/2022 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance, the weather does crease and makes us feel the cold and warmth. Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life
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Date: 1/24/2022 3:58:00 AM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations and comment, hugs ~
Date: 1/23/2022 7:05:00 PM
Making snow angels. Splendorous experience, I could imagine. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2022 3:58:00 AM
Christuraj, thanks so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~
Date: 1/17/2022 9:56:00 PM
Love your sonnet form, Constance. Great rhyming, sprinkled with alliteration from time to time. A sonnet most fine. Also reminds me of childhood fun in Ohio, U.S.A. and playing hockey on the frozen pond behind our house with neighborhood friends. Thanks for sharing, it should do well in the contest. Smiles my friend, Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2022 3:27:00 PM
Bill, thank you for the compliment and comment, hope it does well, smiles _Constance
Date: 1/17/2022 3:21:00 PM
Hello Constance ... a pleasant sonnet to read with good rhyme and flow. i enjoyed reading about your snow adventure as I have never really seen snow - thank you Constance - Lindsay
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Date: 1/17/2022 3:36:00 PM
Lindsay, thank you for the comment and compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/16/2022 4:58:00 PM
Oh, how I envy your love of this scene, Constance...but give me the warmth of a warm, sunny summer day, a frosty glass of iced tea, and a lovely, fully-leaved oak casting shade over my chaise. Best wishes for success in the contest.
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Date: 1/17/2022 2:03:00 PM
Milt, thanks for the visit and comment, we are exactly the opposite, give me a snowy day in Canada, and keep your heat ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

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