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it is snowing and I press my palm against my heart . . . I am holding in an awful ache and p a i n I have for years and my soul is stone COLD and bleeding ice snow is f a l l i n g and melting into tears and each year at this time I have Winter blues . . . weeping echoes are fading away, and those dead will be forever and ever- I w h i s p e r to them- and place a RED rose to my lips and leave it d y i n g on their tomb inside me is this horrid emptiness and a dagger has been PLUNGED into my heart and frozen there forevermore . . . I cannot not fathom a life without my- b e l o v e d but I must go on and snow is FALLING and melting into tears . . . . ________________________ November 30, 2016(Revised) Poetry/Free Verse/Winter Blues Copyright Protected, ID 16-9783-64-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Free Verse: Winter Blues sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 5/5/2018 9:12:00 PM
Wow. Lovely, BW. Superbly done. A well deserved top win. Belated congrats.
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Date: 1/13/2018 1:53:00 PM
So beautifully sad Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fantastic first place win.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:57:00 AM
you always leave me breathless sweet Broken Wings, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:22:00 AM
Your sadness is expressed in lovely lilting words. Hope the new year brings you joy and long lingering smiles.
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Date: 1/3/2018 11:40:00 PM
Like always beautiful, but so heartfelt, Broken Wings. Luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:15:00 AM
Such beautiful and intriguing lines.
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:17:00 AM
Lovely poem of love..." Winter blues" All the best BW
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2018 7:03:00 AM
Arturo, thank you for the lovely !
Date: 1/1/2018 8:47:00 PM
So beautifully sad my dear friend, Constance. I feel you in this amazing piece. Praying for you always. Best wishes in the contest and have av Blessed and Wonderful New Year to you my dear friend! Hugs.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2018 7:06:00 AM
Galeo , thank you for the compliment and Happy New Year to you also

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