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Winter

Gracefully she accepts the scepter from the season past Winter turns her head and with a steady, unhurried pace Covers the earth with diamonds and her velvet gown Then happily decorates the barren trees with ivory lace In her heart she knows her reign will be a measured thing In time the scepter will pass again and the bough will green But now she rules while the land rests and gathers strength Her time, a biding time, in its vast quietude a sleep serene 1/4/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2015 7:16:00 PM
Great use of personification Barb! Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:33:00 PM
Love your description of winter minus the angst of its negative aspects! My mother loves winter and especially its snows. Great write my friend. A solid 7!!!!
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:25:00 PM
Barbara, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:18:00 PM
Ahh!! You make the cold winter read romanticly..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, gardens don't do the same every year for it depends on what happens with the weather as well as what man/woman do with the work..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:47:00 PM
Hi Barbara: a beautiful portic description of Winter with carefully chosen words. my compliments.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/6/2015 3:26:00 PM
thank you Ralph, I appreciate your support. Barbara
Date: 1/6/2015 2:05:00 AM
Awesome write Barbara! Congrats on huge win!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/6/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you..glad you stopped by. Hope all is well. BG
Date: 1/5/2015 9:22:00 PM
Enjoyed a fine write on winter, congrats on the win, Barbara
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Date: 1/5/2015 2:36:00 PM
Just love your poem Barbara. Congratulations on your top win!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/6/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thank you...l Hope you have a lovely 2015..Barbara
Date: 1/5/2015 2:07:00 PM
a biding time, how nice a phrase for winter. this is so nice because the form you chose makes it succinct and also beautiful. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:37:00 PM
Hi Barbara, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. It presents vivid imagery as the Queen of Winter takes her throne. Sandra
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/6/2015 12:19:00 PM
Glad you liked my queen like poem..lol. Barbara
Date: 1/5/2015 11:03:00 AM
The reverence of the passed scepter sets up this seasonal poem. I can almost see in my minds eye the passing of seasonal scepter to each season. Excellent delivery and images. Congrats on your cleverly written win !!
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Date: 1/5/2015 8:17:00 AM
great Quatrain Barbara congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/5/2015 7:51:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:08:00 AM
beautiful imagery and personification - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:38:00 AM
Winter as a lacy fingered lady. I like it. Love, daver
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/6/2015 12:20:00 PM
So good to hear from you...thank you! Barbara

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