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wingless fly

to get to the source no mountain peak stands too high for our soul grows wings transcending limitations of body-mind our Father awaits our embrace and we can’t keep Him waiting lest heart breaks infusing His breath in organic form vast space becomes an ocean and as we swim the path appears by itself the pain of separation followed by joy of union makes the game worthwhile enlivening heart

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Date: 12/7/2023 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, US! Confined syllables and all, your message came through, spiritual and worthy work. Blessings, Anaya
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Date: 12/7/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/7/2023 6:34:00 AM
Way to go with this creative winner in Suzette's contest. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Date: 12/7/2023 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 12/6/2023 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations with your placement. Seeker. If you would like to have a copy of the tables as mentioned on the contest page, please soup mail me. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 12/6/2023 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Suzette, big effort hosting!
Date: 11/12/2023 2:12:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed your uplifting poem. The first verse spoke to me 'transcending limitations of body-mind.' I agree. Such pain exists in the separation from Him...but the joy of connecting is spiritually breathtaking. Am faving this one, Sara
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Date: 11/12/2023 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sara :)
Date: 11/12/2023 3:13:00 AM
Such a beautiful, inspiring, truly uplifting poem from you. I love the title too. Such wonderful lines to admire and reflect upon. I love,’for our soul grow wings’ ‘ vast space becomes an ocean’ . The last stanza is simply stunning in its heartfelt message of the sheer joy of union. So enjoyed having the pleasure of reading this inspiring poem. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed Sunday.
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Date: 11/12/2023 3:47:00 AM
Thank you, Christina :)

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