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Window

“Fling open the windows to peek into wider vistas opening and let in light and fresh air”!  ~ By Poet


Every day, he walks up to the window, A practice he has recently developed. This window is his sole opening to the world. Sometimes he sits on the reclining chair by its side, And watch for hours life unfolding. This morning from his lonely cottage The old man vacantly gazed, At the lazy curl of smoke from the chimneys His eyes further wandered over, to the dew dampened meadows And the sloping paths that ran round. Over them how many times, he had rambled leisurely, With Jack, his spaniel that died a few months ago. Though single with no legacy to leave behind, Never he felt so lonely as of late, And the memories of his dog keep haunting him. One morning he found his dog lying stretched out. Alas! From that slumber, he didn’t rise! Now with nothing to look forward to in life, He is in no hurry to leave his cottage as before. Each day of his life starts with the same ritual. Every day the old man would brew his tea. Pour it steaming into his large porcelain mug, And get settled on a chair by the table, Looking through the small window, His only opening into the wider world! ___________________________ April.24. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Writing Challenge ‘W’ Words Poetry Contest Sponsor- Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Dearest Valsa, the empathy of your words comes straight from your caring heart. Such a sad story of loss and grief that stifles life - his life companion, his dog Jack, gone but mourning now the companion breathing its inertia! My heart aches with the sadness of your poem. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you!
La France Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Valso, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I like your quote and image too !
George Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for the contest, also for the high placement.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 6:48 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 4:05 AM
A very sad scene painted found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Poet Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Such a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win, Valsa.
Volumes Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Congrats on your win for this lovely poem Valsa.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture. Have a great/blessed day..............
Gentile Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Valsa, I am so touched by your very moving write! Happy Wednesday xxoo
Daniel Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 3:29 AM
That window is his outlet, really soulful poem, Valsa:)
Volumes Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Valsa you depicted the action of this old man so well I felt I was standing in the room with him. There is sadness in loneliness, and I feel the next generation may have it a little easier, with the technology we have now for older folk to be able to use computers and connect with the outside world in this way. Your poem is lovely Best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 3:41 PM
So sad, but what a great way to do the window theme. (this kind of guy needs to adopt a new dog!)
Mcconnell Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Nice penning Valsa, good imagery and insightfulness with nice expression too. Blessings,Gordon
Turner Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:19 AM
loneliness is a strange friend. It does things to you, you can't possibly imagine. I hope you never have to find out what true loneliness is like. i do not see this so much as sad but neglect. My neighbors know I live alone and they come check on me almost daily. Thought provoking write, Valsa.
Brul Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 9:34 AM
I have no words! Sadder than sad...bluer than blue.
Y. Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Hi Valsa, You have penned such a sad and well-written entry for the contest. I could sense a profound loneliness. You highlighted the chosen word well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:32 AM
How sad, and there are so many lonely, mostly old people around, you have captured his emptiness, his vacant staring, his lonely boring uneventful life that even if he died today, would anyone know or care? SO SO sad! Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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April 24, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Sadly this falls into many of us, traditions of man, being content, rituals, repetition, just looking out small window, : ). Yes, sad for the man in your poem though, that one would feel nothing left without his dog, they do bring much joy and happiness to life
Pandit Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 6:04 AM
You gave his loneliness voice and meaning. Wonderfully descriptive, emotive write, Valsa.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 3:44 AM
so sad! so sad.... I want to give him a puppy and a prayer. God bless you. Love, Gina
Buhagiar Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 2:57 AM
Sad but well-constructed. One could spend hours watching the movements down below. Not with my house though. Too much construction going on.
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 1:48 AM
- Reminds me of the time I worked as a nurse at the nursing home... the window view was all they lived for... a deeply moving poem, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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