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Wind To Be Felt

I am strong, I am the wind Moving the clouds Moving the trees Breaking branches as I please Moving sailboats, bringing fun Cooling down heat from the sun I scatter seeds that turn to growth I carry kites with birds that balance With me in the air I move I merge ripples and waves to lake shores Turn snowfall into blizzards Sway flowers in spring Carry leaves across the land in fall I am here, every season, the wind Moving ‘things’ around for you to see Because I, you cannot see, but will hear There to be felt when I arrive anywhere Heidi Sands 6/20/17 *Placed 2nd in Contest: Late June Standard Contest

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Date: 6/21/2017 10:27:00 AM
Really cool personification poem, Heidi. You nailed it w/a 10. Now go do some wind-sprints. LOL! Very expressive and au natural poetry. Love always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 10:37:00 AM
LOL Wind Sprints ! Funny Freddie. I am happy you like this. I enjoy practicing with these personification poems :) Thank you. Have a great day.
Date: 6/21/2017 10:24:00 AM
I love this... I'm sorry I don't read more of your poetry but the only time I have is at red lights :0( Thank you for reading mine :0)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 10:36:00 AM
Hi Mike. I am happy you like this. Not a problem. I understand. and you are welcome. I enjoy reading your poetry :)
Date: 6/21/2017 5:13:00 AM
Your poem a poetic breeze that caresses the soul dear, Heidi! So dynamically lovely! Good luck!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios Your comment is a pleasure to read, and yes, it placed in the contest that closed yesterday :)
Date: 6/20/2017 11:01:00 PM
What a lovely poem on wind. You brought life to it. Congrats on your win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Afzal! :)
Date: 6/20/2017 7:02:00 PM
Congrats!!! Heidi...a wind felt win...all the best...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2017 8:30:00 PM
Thanks so much WW :)
Date: 6/20/2017 6:22:00 PM
Miss Heidi, this is original... I love it very much!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2017 8:30:00 PM
So happy to hear you love this one Akkina. Thanks :)
Date: 6/20/2017 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful...has me singing Lynyrd Skynyrd's "Call me the breeze". Your poem is right, the wind, regardless of the season is always with us.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2017 4:24:00 PM
That is Cool...it has you singing! Yes, it is always with us. Thanks Chris :)

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