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we cannot see it but feel it everywhere cooling summer breeze 24th April 2015

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Date: 5/4/2015 12:03:00 PM
A summer breeze refreshes in a way that lifts the spirit..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/4/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2015 1:58:00 PM
Great haiku I love it.
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Armand:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/26/2015 12:06:00 AM
beautiful Haiku Jan! That's a big 7...
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Date: 4/26/2015 4:35:00 AM
Thanks Ronald:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 1:36:00 PM
- If the temperature is high ..... it feels delicious :) - Great haiku, Jan !! (7) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 10:02:00 AM
Now knowing you and your poetry titles, I never over guess as to what your poem is about until I start to read ;-) Whew, a breeze of a different note. Love this shortie, hugs//James xx
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:20:00 AM
ha ha ha - am I getting predictable - oh dear:-) Glad you enjoyed James:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 8:28:00 AM
a more fragrant write here, Jan x
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:31:00 AM
Arthur mailed me after reading this one and left a cheeky comment ... so wind II was created - i don't need much encouragement windy poems lol:-) Hugs Jan
Date: 4/25/2015 8:25:00 AM
Jan, Both the image and the Haiku are fantastic. Well done.
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Howard I do appreciate you dropping by to comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 4:49:00 AM
mmm that it something I mainly always have, I live in a wind tunnel between the Brendon and Quantock Hills so refreshing on a hot day but icy cold in winter love it Jan hugs 7
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Date: 4/25/2015 4:55:00 AM
We live 5 mins from the sea - the power of the wind can almost knock you over on some days - it sure takes my breath away:-) Wind II just posted:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 12:40:00 AM
so true, love the picture a 7 , hugs eve
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Eve - we can only see its effects - heard a radio comment about it and the poem came to me:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 12:02:00 AM
gosh, that picture is rather spooky, jan!! I like how the first part of your poem seemed mysterious.
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:22:00 AM
I heard a comment on the radio about not actually being able to 'see' wind only see its effects - this is the result:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 10:44:00 PM
Is it wind or is it love? Nice write, Jan! I hope you and your family are well. I got hope yesterday and don't leave again until Wednesday...
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:24:00 AM
stay safe Dave - thanks for dropping by:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 10:09:00 PM
Fine haiku - I see you stuck to the American form 5 7 5 which is all to the good. You have never been to New York? Where do you live? You must pay this amazing city a visit. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:24:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by - i live on a tiny Island mid way between England and Ireland - it is called 'the Isle of Man:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 9:12:00 PM
Lovely haiku. Love the picture of her hair flying in the wind. So carefree. #7
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:23:00 AM
It is a spooky image but I loved it:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 8:48:00 PM
Jan, lovely words to accompany a lovely image, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my unfinished poem, burning daylight day lily, the poem is finished now
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:21:00 AM
Will drop by today:-) the image was lovely am sure the poem will be too:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 8:36:00 PM
Lovely...soothing...relaxing haiku, dear Jan. Loved it...Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:20:00 AM
Thanks as ever Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 8:17:00 PM
A lovely haiku Jan...best wishes
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:20:00 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 6:36:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 4/24/2015 6:42:00 PM
aww thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 6:03:00 PM
Excellent pen Jan! Very nice haiku my dear friend! A7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 4/24/2015 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Dorian for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 5:00:00 PM
There's nothing like that sea breeze thanks for the write.
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Date: 4/24/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Robert - as I live on a little Island and constantly surrounded by it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2015 4:38:00 PM
Ahhh...can't wait for that! It's like magic, isn't it? Lovely Haiku, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:50:00 PM
Me too Sandra. We physically cannot 'see' wind only feel its effects but oh that cooling breeze on a summer day is wonderful especially if you are walking by the sea:-) hugs Jan xx