Wind

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wind took my hair blowing and tangling it and I was lost in a fluttering tempest of butterflies swirling and twirling the leaves danced and the branches creaked I was spinning, spinning and I looked at wind oh he was beautiful violent at the moment yet I had felt his gentle fingers in my hair stroking and he took my breath away . . . __________________________ March 20, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/wind Copyright Protected, ID 20-1239-238-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to Strand Choice R sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Frederic Parker

Date: 3/27/2020 3:43:00 PM

A true moment of rapture...congratulations on your win

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2020 8:38:00 PM

Frederic, thanks for the congratulations, yes, I had quite to romance with the wind _Constance

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 3/27/2020 1:10:00 PM

Love the picture!

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2020 8:39:00 PM

Joan, thanks for visiting _Constance

Brenda Chiri

Date: 3/27/2020 12:14:00 PM

Dear heart congrats on your top win!;)

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2020 8:39:00 PM

Brenda, thanks for the congrats _Constance

John Watt

Date: 3/27/2020 12:14:00 PM

I really enjoyed this flirtatious encounter with the wind, Constance. "I was lost in a fluttering tempest" is such a yummy line. The picture of leaves and butterflies and hair flying all over. Love the creative indentations, the image too. Congrats on your wind (pun intended), I'm adding this to my faves. Hugs/John

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2020 8:40:00 PM

John, thanks for the congrats and hugs and the compliment on my poem _Constance