Win Together!

Win Together! Love saw its wedding day. Life promises were made. Romantic glances stayed. Anticipation blazed. Two lovers joined as one. Together, dreaming…dazed. If the love should fall, If the heart should break, If romance lets go, If all hope soon dies, Start the day anew. Forgive the faults. Sweep anger out. Show selflessness. Refresh the nest. Together, Prayerfully… Compromise. Sweet notes. Spice life. Win! © © Dane Smith-Johnsen February 11, 2010 Poetic form: Diminished Hexaverse

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/18/2010 1:11:00 PM

Definitely a message needed for struggling marriages. Awesome write! Congratulations!

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 2/18/2010 12:52:00 PM

Beautiful! Congrats on your win :) Keep writing and winning, my best wishes are always with you! Love and peace--- Amaan.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/18/2010 8:15:00 AM

May congratulations to you for your win in the D. Hex contest, dear Dane Ann! Great write, indeed! Thanks for your comments on mypoem! Peace, Audrey

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/18/2010 12:51:00 AM

A good message here, congratulations on your win, well done...Margaret

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/17/2010 5:18:00 PM

Dane Ann congrats on your win in Catie's contest - god Bless, mj

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2010 4:31:00 PM

wow, your last line said it, WIN, and win you did with this sweet poem, Dane Ann. Congratulations. Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/17/2010 3:47:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your second place win in the Hex contest... I am still in shock at my first place win .. congrats on your stunning poem and win.. brilliant D.H. luv.. Linda-Marie..