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Feb.13.2025

8 By 5 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

go to bed happy wake up all sappy never be crappy you need not worry don't be in hurry you conceal your tear just inhale clean air burdens, bravely bear. life is bright and grey find your time to pray pleasantly you stay this life will not last do not look to past your time moves so fast winds sweep in flurry all pain, you bury.

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John Loving Iii

Date: 2/20/2025 3:32:00 PM

It reaches your common sence.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/17/2025 10:48:00 PM

Dear Valsa, took me too long to respond as my computer comes and goes. Will have to buy a new one. Lovely poem, so smooth and precious thoughts. Hope you'll win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2025 11:53:00 AM

Great positivity, Valsa

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/13/2025 11:25:00 AM

And as fast, as this reads, as fast as life goes, so we must slow down, take a breath even with burdens and tears, still some things are difficult to bear, but God is still there. Very nice, Valsa!

Jay Narain

Date: 2/13/2025 10:09:00 AM

Beautiful poem of wisdom and spirituality.

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/13/2025 9:21:00 AM

"do not look to past your time moves so fast" -- Wonderfully, profoundly stated. Past can't be changed. Don't let it own you. Born again with the dawn of a new day.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/13/2025 8:02:00 AM

Dear Valsa, I love how you balance the light and dark in your verse, urging to let go of past burdens and embrace the fleeting nature of time with faith and resilience. It’s such a tender invitation to live fully in the present, shedding worries as we breathe in the fresh air. The flow of your poem wraps around me like a comforting hug. Happy Vanetines Day, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 2/13/2025 7:17:00 AM

Go to bed happy, find time to pray, don't be in a hurry... All worthy lines Valsa. Sadly, so many people in the world have little reason to go to bed happy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2025 4:59:00 AM

This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. When the syllable count drops down below about 8 then it makes it very difficult to write but you have done a good job. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/13/2025 4:31:00 AM

Amen, beautiful poem of knowledge, wisdom and one given understanding of the treasures of life: )