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Why Oh Why

he sits, with his head in his hands remembering how love had been, now, because of his stupidity he was on his own again remembering, how love had been, behind the bars he now called home, he was on his own again, realising, he was a fool behind the bars he now called home, his mind, aflame with regret realising he was a fool, to have stabbed her to death. his mind aflame, with regret why... did he buy a knife that day...why to have stabbed her to death because she had found another beau why... did he buy a knife that day...why now, because of his stupidity because she had found another beau he sits, with his head in his hands
Penned October2 2016 Why oh why 1 Pantoum contest.... judged 10/25/2016 12:00:00 AM

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Date: 10/24/2016 2:57:00 PM
Oh... well done this is a sad poem and sadness all through this poem. I felt that he regretted what he done. This is a great write.
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Date: 10/17/2016 5:31:00 PM
Hi Seren, just dropping y to say congrats on your win!!!!!!!!!! Hugs!
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Date: 10/17/2016 2:08:00 PM
Hi Seren, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/16/2016 5:14:00 PM
He's a bit like Trump, at least he's asking for help cause lord knows he needs it.
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:04:00 AM
Foolish thoughts and actions can ruin lives. Don't know much of the form but flows well. I think a few poems could be written here. Inspiring.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/16/2016 7:22:00 PM
I am having deja vu! LOL
Date: 10/5/2016 12:43:00 AM
You have done a wonderful job on this! Top notch... /|\
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