Daniel Turner Poet Sonnet

Who's To Blame

Why is it hard for some to understand
That history is kept for us to learn
Misdeeds of generations past, unplanned
Will be repeated if we're not concerned

The easy part of life is looking back
We sit in judgement with that luxury
Bad deeds done long ago we now attack
Old customs taught back then which they believed

Now history tells us beliefs have changed
Are we responsible for their mistakes
To burden us with their shame now seems strange
The problem comes when we try to erase

Our unborn generations aren't to blame
For wrongs which we commit, for future's shame



  an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Freddie Robinson Jr. June 26, 2017 at 7:49 PM Very strong and forthright poem, Daniel. No, the children should not pay for the sins of the father. As it is written: The father has eaten the sour grape, and the children's teeth are set on edge. Each person shall bear their own sin. Great poem w/a powerful message. When Jesus condemned the Jewish rulers of His day, he said they do the same wicked deeds as their fathers. So, if people still have hateful ways like back in the day, then they will be judged accordingly. Love always, bruh.

Vladislav Raven August 21, 2016 at 5:25 PM Hi Daniel, the content of this Sonnet is really good my friend. This is indeed a well thought out Sonnet. The concept of the write inspires me to try and write better my friend. As Lynn says Daniel, this is a thought provoking write. You have a gift there my friend, keep using it. May your words ever run gold. This is a definite seven Daniel. We can't be held to blame for acts committed in the past but we should learn from then. We don't want them to keep repeating....Mike.

Lynn Marie August 8, 2016 at 5:47 PM A very thought provoking topic, skillfully penned in a manner to invite constructive conversation. That this is also a "Sonnet", amazes me and showcases the breadth of your talent. A wonderfully written piece; a pleasure to read! blessings, lynn Daniel Turner August 8, 2016 at 6:18 PM Thank you, Lynn. I appreciate your kind visit and supporting comments.

Tom Quigley August 1, 2016 at 1:59 PM Thoughtful and skillfully written. Agree that there's plenty of blame to go round... Daniel Turner August 1, 2016 at 3:32 PM Absolutely!! But to say anyone today is responsible for heinous acts committed centuries ago would be absurd. However, it is our responsibility to see that they do not happen again. Thanks Tom. Always a pleasure.

Janice Canerdy July 31, 2016 at 1:21 PM A 7 for this skillfully-written sonnet, Daniel! Janice Daniel Turner July 31, 2016 at 1:41 PM Thank you Janice. You have apparently read between the lines with you powers of insight. I appreciate your support.

Kelli White July 31, 2016 at 10:00 AM If only Eve had not listened to the Serpent in the Garden of Eden. Daniel Turner July 31, 2016 at 10:54 AM Something tells me, you've beguiled a few in your days. lol Thanks for friendly visits, Kelli.

Probir Gupta July 31, 2016 at 5:37 AM Very true ... "Bad deeds done long ago we now attack" ... Nice ... Daniel Turner July 31, 2016 at 8:19 AM Thank Probir. This poem was written, to hopefully, make people think. Obviously you did just that. Thank you for your time, understanding and support.