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Who Really Am I-Win

I have laid a firm foundation with the bricks That others have thrown at me. I have brains in my head as everyone I could steer myself in any direction I chose I am the guy who decides where to go. I tell myself always That flies are born to be eaten by spiders. I find it difficult to judge myself still As I have become a bit more socially acceptable Over the years in terms of my material. Having different identities those of a son A lover, a husband, a house and home maker And now a father and a grandfather. I am in dilemma, Who am I?. I roamed in my thoughts over the universe Immersed with the great writings. Roaming over the four continents Physically exposed to different cultures Meeting people of different sects and creed Got awards and rewards And with those came some bad habits But they have taken their tolls and left. Now I am like a remnant of an autumn’s cloud Uselessly roaming in the sky O Sun ever-glorious Your touch has not yet melted my vapor Make me one with your light And thus I count months and years Oh, take away my emptiness Paint it with myriad colors with gold.
+++++++ April 27, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: I Am by Frank H.

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Date: 5/6/2014 9:03:00 AM
A truly amazing soul revealing piece! Thanks for lifting others up by sharing!
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Date: 5/3/2014 1:18:00 PM
Hello Dr. Ram, I could read your masterpieces for hours and hours. You are the depth of a masterful writer~ Thank you very much for sharing this BEAUTY, with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/30/2014 8:42:00 AM
Congrats on yor gold then doc! U weave personal magic here, a sincere yet genius poem. Cheers.
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:04:00 AM
This was just Number One material and I am so happy Frank thought so too Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win!
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:22:00 AM
Everything that we experience in life, both the good and the bad, helps to shape who we really are....A very deep and expressive write. I really enjoyed reading your winning poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 4/28/2014 12:59:00 PM
Hi Ram. Congrats on your win. Soulful and marvellously expressive. Well done. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 4/27/2014 11:12:00 PM
You did a fabulous job on this contest. You deserve high praise :)
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Date: 4/27/2014 10:32:00 PM
Wonderful write on great u! congrats on top win Dr Ram !
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Date: 4/27/2014 5:59:00 PM
Dr. Ram, this is a very beautiful reflection of one's self... Congratulations on your win in Frank's contest... Verlena
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Date: 4/27/2014 3:26:00 PM
Dr Ram, .. Congratulations, in Frank's contest.. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:49:00 AM
This is a very beautiful write my dear friend Dr. Ram. Though sometimes we find thing/s still missing in ourselves or discontentment, we should keep in mind that we always deserve to love and be loved. Splendid poem my dear friend. Good luck in the contest! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:59:00 PM
A beautiful poem Dr. Ram. just like your soul. As to who you are - you are a special being that God created to make a difference in people's lives, maybe ours. Great poem and many blessings... Lucilla Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:29:00 PM
This is beautifully done, sometimes its hard to take a good look at ourselves without being dismayed. Love it :D
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Date: 4/26/2014 3:40:00 PM
Good job, Dr. Mehta. You've written well about the crisis of identity, and, although we seem to be intelligent, I wonder if we'll ever be smart enough to figure out who we really are. I think I know some of me, but there also some of me that I avoid.
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Date: 4/26/2014 3:37:00 PM
Nice introspective write Dr. Ram..
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Date: 4/26/2014 12:31:00 PM
quite a self examination Ram. You handle your poems so well. Like you i question much about myself but lately,although I do worry, my answer to questions like yours is to shrug and say I am what I am ( just like Popeye used to say)
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Date: 4/26/2014 11:46:00 AM
A very fine write Dr Ram...lots of introspection and an end the floats on the wind. BG
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:54:00 AM
wow, Dr. Ram, a very impressive write for Frank. I think he is going to LOVE this one. I sure do!!
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:04:00 AM
this is wonderful! very descriptive and introspective, too. i enjoyed it very much!
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:24:00 AM
There's one thing you still have Dr Ram, is the magic. I aways enjoy reading your work. JTC
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