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Who Is Me

Who is he? Who is She? Who is me? Questions so easily asked, but often frail and weak. Today i was asked who am I and why? I had no answer as my brain crashed and my mind fried. Well you see I am me, Simply put i'm what you see. I am so unique it would be an insult to label so frivolously Reputation is something we work on till the day we die. To expect me to explain when my actions speak aloud is a crime. I suppose if i were to explain myself in order to entertain. I'd keep my answer short simple and plain. With my mind fried and an answer made harder than needed to be Quietly i mutter I am my actions and the rest is a mystery. Who am I, and what makes me, Me? Well dont ask me, just watch and observe carefully.

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Date: 10/12/2021 12:00:00 PM
Dear Dylan, your poem is beautifully thought-provoking. A wonderfully emotive piece and splendid rhymes too. Indeed actions speak louder than words. Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/6/2021 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on this clever write.
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Date: 9/27/2021 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations Dylan. Your poem is spot on- One can never truly know someone unless they journey along life with them x
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Date: 9/23/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Reputation is something we work on till the day we die." Many forget this. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:42:00 PM
how many entries where there im just curious
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much i was worried i overhtought this competition. thank you
Date: 9/23/2021 7:01:00 AM
The title is the classical philosophic question. The only way to find is just as you have said: "just watch and observe carefully" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much im so scared to share my writing think to much of what people might think all your guys words bring me joy and confidence .
Date: 9/22/2021 11:10:00 PM
Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much im so scared to share my writing think to much of what people might think all your guys words bring me joy and confidence
Date: 9/22/2021 11:06:00 PM
Very nicely done . congrats on top win!
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much im so scared to share my writing think to much of what people might think all your guys words bring me joy and confidence
Date: 9/22/2021 10:43:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much im so scared to share my writing think to much of what people might think all your guys words bring me joy and confidence
Date: 9/22/2021 10:17:00 PM
I love how you say we are what we portray with our actions. That honestly makes me think so much. Congratulations on your win!
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Dylan Frost
Date: 9/24/2021 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much im so scared to share my writing think to much of what people might think all your guys words bring me joy and confidence

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