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Who Carries the Biggest Burden

Who carries the biggest burden, Is it the child who carries on their small shoulders the expectations? Of the adults around them, Is it the teenager carrying the possibility of failing their exams? and not seeing the point in living. Is it the adult who now carries the responsibility of? Putting a roof over their families head. Or is it the senior citizen who carries the collective wisdom, Yet lacks the knowledge required to pass it on, Or the will to to do so.

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Date: 10/9/2019 10:35:00 AM
I am a senior - I understand! Nice poetry.
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David Smith
Date: 10/9/2019 2:23:00 PM
You have given me a positive start to my morning. Thank you. regards David
Date: 10/9/2019 5:13:00 AM
We all pay the price when we don't do our part, I enjoyed your poem David.
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Date: 10/9/2019 5:26:00 AM
Nice to hear from you Pixie. Time wizzes by. Our first grandson now 8 months old. Glad you liked my poem. My burdens have been lighter than most as I have been fortunate to have some great mentors in my life and have also been a mentor to others. Hope being a pixie helps keep your burden light. Regards David in NZ

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