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Five minutes ago, she knew him as her beloved son Now she had that scared look in her eye, memories just vanished without so much as a goodbye From her point of view, she was always stepping in and out of a fog Couldn't seem to remember things too clearly It was as if her mind got poisoned from breathing in too much smog She loved to move around the house like she was on a treasure hunt Searching for those hidden clues, as to who those two strange men were Her home of thirty something odd years at times seemed vaguely familiar to her Those scattered memories would somehow begin to seep back whenever she heard the sound of some Etta James blues She adored the kind smile on the two strange men faces They seemed friendly enough as they sat sipping tea, and chatted about things of which she had no memory She only wished she could remember who they were; though they insisted they were husband and son, how could she be certain for sure It always broke their hearts when she would ask, who are you? And they would restart the arduous task of filling up her empty mind with memories she would never be able to hold on to Five minutes ago, she knew him as her beloved husband Now she had that wary look in her eye, memories just vanished without so much as a goodbye

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Date: 11/28/2016 3:46:00 AM
well written friend :) rating..
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Date: 11/14/2016 9:47:00 AM
Sad but so good, You have captured it
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Date: 11/11/2016 9:04:00 PM
This is so sad RW!
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Date: 11/11/2016 3:52:00 PM
Well written Freddie. You showed this well and so sad it is.
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:51:00 PM
I read Dementia or Alzheimer's in this sad and heart breaking poem. I have experience something like this and it dies hurt. Sad and lonely is this poem Freddie.
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:34:00 PM
You nailed the sadness that goes along with someone losing their memory. It's heartbreaking to witness. I can't even imagine how scary it must be for the individual. I feel for all involved. Great write!!
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:05:00 PM
Hi Freddie, You crafted a well written piece for a sad subject. You captured the feeling of someone suffering from memory loss very well.Great job:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/11/2016 2:10:00 PM
Ty Alexis. It is such a sad affair to witness happen to people and how it affects their loved ones. Very tragic. Much love to you lady.

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