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Who are we at our core

In life's unfolding, through this transient phase, I witness kin and friends succumb to age's haze. The pain and agony of their loss, echo in our hearts, Time may heal, but leaves indelible, mental charts. Existence's truth, beyond forms that fade, Resides eternal, where souls find peace displayed. Thoughts and beliefs, like shadows, fleet on meadows, Inconstant companions in life's fleeting shows. Of cosmic flows, our understanding's small, Yet an inner child within, resiliently stands tall. Through ebb and flow, in life's uncertain play, The inner child's laughter persists, a guiding ray. Unbound by temporal, nor transient glow, In the eternal realm, its gifts continue to bestow. Within the stillness, where silence gently hums, A core untouched by the world's beating drums. Not in externals, but in the soul's own clay, The essence of our being finds its sway.

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Date: 1/2/2024 7:10:00 PM
A deep and personal poem, Jay. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Great rhyming, and the flow was smooth and easy to read. I like the whole poem, but the last verse touched me the most. A FAV for my list. Thanks for sharing your poetic skills with us. Happy New Year! Have a great 2024! Bill
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Date: 12/31/2023 9:15:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Have a great New Year, dear Jay !
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Date: 12/30/2023 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement
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Date: 12/30/2023 9:45:00 AM
A thoughtful discourse on who we are--meaningful poem, Jay.
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Date: 12/29/2023 3:05:00 PM
a magnificent poem, Jay! I agree with your philosophy expressed so well via your imagery. The temporal life is just that--temporary. It offers up lessons I suppose, but at the end of the day, we find our core in the stillness of our souls and true identity. Have to fave this one. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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